Spring Break Matching Contest - 2 - Favorites - Spring 2016 • Millikin University
sun rays warming Erica Forbes |
tiny seashells Alexis Dockins |
south carolina sun Jacob Hamilton |
faint pink turns to Erica Forbes |
tiny seashells |
south carolina sun |
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tiny seashells top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption stealing kisses
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bottom quarter champion stealing kisses |
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up on the rooftop |
stealing kisses |
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up on the rooftop Marah Kittelson |
yearning for a quick thrill . . . Erica Forbes |
driving through back roads Tyler Trzcinski |
stealing kisses Taryn Pepping |
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TOP half champion stealing kisses
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CHAMPION & GRAND CHAMPION stealing kisses
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sunrise service BOTTOM half champion |
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walking with family Alexis Dockins |
next year Taryn Pepping |
pushing and shoving Whitney Gray |
Easter bunny Lauren Montesano |
next year |
pushing and shoving |
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pushing and shoving top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion sunrise service
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bottom quarter champion sunrise service |
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sunrise service |
Easter politics |
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sunrise service Taryn Pepping |
Mary wanders around Randy Brooks |
Palm Sunday— Whitney Gray |
Easter politics Marah Kittelson |
© 2016, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
2 Matching Contest - Spring Break Favorites - Fall 2016 • Millikin University
home Jacob Hamilton |
bright red hives Taryn Pepping |
I continue to Taryn Pepping |
hay flavored breath on my cheek Genevieve Breitbach |
bright red hives |
hay flavored breath on my cheek |
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bright red hives top quarter champion |
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TOP half Chamption little brother
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bottom quarter champion little brother |
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little brother |
coffee in the morning |
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little brother Tyler Trzcinski |
worse than my mother Whitney Gray |
sister's grin lights up Genevieve Breitbach |
coffee in the morning Michael Barber |
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TOP half champion little brother
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CHAMPION she clutches her rosary
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she clutches her rosary BOTTOM half champion |
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sobbing Taryn Pepping |
inescapable Corrin Littlefield |
trembling Marah Kittelson |
picking out an outfit Lauren Montesano |
inescapable |
picking out an outfit |
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top quarter champion |
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BOTTOM half champion she clutches her rosary
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bottom quarter champion she clutches her rosary |
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time apart still best friends |
she clutches her rosary |
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time apart still best friends Jacob Hamilton |
time stops Corrin Littlefield |
she clutches her rosary Natalie Smith |
together we'll always be young Whitney Gray |
© 2016, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
Reading Responses to favorite matches.
sun rays warming |
tiny seashells |
south carolina sun |
faint pink turns to |
I fell in love with both of these haiku because of their warm and inviting tonality. Warm weather immediately takes me to a happy place, and additionally, usually reminds me of good times with family and friends. So naturally, it wasn't difficult to relate to and appreciate these sunny, smiling haiku. I can just feel the hot beams of sun hitting my skin and crisping it, just as I can imagine the feel of the grains of sand slipping through my fingers as I reveal a tiny little seashell to add to my collection. Katherine My favorite pair from the matching contest consists of water and sunshine, two of my favorite things in general. These two are a lovely match, and could easily make a story, in my opinion. It is almost like a camera pan from sky to sand, taking the reader from the warmth on their face and looking up at the sky, to looking down at the damp coolness of their fingers fumbling through the rocky beach. I love finding shells, and it's a running joke that my suitcase always weighs a few pounds more on the return trip simply because of all the rocks I collect anywhere I go. It also makes me a little guilty because these precious rocks I bring back to civilization too often go missing quickly and only turn up in the bi yearly deep clean of my room's nooks and crannies. Genevieve |
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tiny seashells |
South Carolina sun |
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I like this match of haiku the most because I can relate to both of them. I like the first haiku because it reminds me of when I was at the beach and how I would sometimes go out searching for a unique seashell that I could bring back home. Also I would collect the rocks that I find on the beach because they were unique in shape and texture and color. I liked the second haiku because the details that are used are perfect in describing South Carolina because it is very sunny and the insect bite up your skin. There is a lot of alligators and snakes as well, since its close to Florida. Emilio |
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up on the rooftop |
stealing kisses |
tiny seashells |
stealing kisses |
Both of these haikus respond to very intimate environments, and while they describe different circumstances, they both bring up similar emotions for me. While I know the exact moment being described in the 'stealing kisses' haiku, I can imagine moments where I felt the same type of security and playfulness within the 'rooftop' haiku. I love how both are describing different instances, but they could be about the same couple. Taryn |
I really liked this match of haiku. Both haiku show love and a sense of caring a lot about something. In the first haiku, the tiny seashells are incredibly important to them and they care greatly about these seashells. In the second haiku, the person cares greatly for their lover. I also felt like there is a connection in each haiku. The person has a connection to the seashells and they represent something very important to the person. Maybe they are a reminder of an amazing vacation or an adventure. The person has a connection with the person they are stealing kisses from. They hold a special place in the person's heart and the kisses are important to both of them. I really liked both of the haiku because they bring about such specific emotions and memories. I couldn't help but smile at both of the haiku because they brought about such specific memories. I like how important the haiku feel. They themselves are important because of the message they are giving and the emotions they are sharing. Corrin I paired these two haiku together because I liked how intimate they both are, and they are two of my favorites from the collection. I thought the two haiku connected through their idea of simplicity. For example, in the first haiku, the author talks about the small, simple seashells: nothing too extravagant, but each individual shell is special in its own way. In the second, I imagine a couple, stealing small pecks of kisses at each stop sign. None of these kisses are the long, romantic kiss or make-out sessions, but these small cute pecks on the cheek that mean more than any other display of affection. Whitney |
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up on the rooftop |
yearning for a quick thrill . . . |
driving through back roads |
stealing kisses |
walking with family |
next year |
pushing and shoving |
Easter bunny |
For these two haiku I like how they differ so greatly, yet I can certainly relate to both of them. The first haiku is where I can see myself out working or something and wishing that I could be with my family over the holiday. I have had experiences like this before working on holidays in the summer. It is always a bummer to me having to work on beautiful holidays in the summer because I want to see my family and enjoy their company on a perfect day. And I can also relate to the second haiku because my family can be annoying at times and this year especially I wanted to be back here with my fraternity brothers hanging out with them rather than spend Easter with the same old boring family. Joe |
These haiku were two of my favorite in the matching contest because I feel that they both grasp the same idea or feeling. They both portray the struggle of being an “adult”, but still feeling or acting childish. I feel like this is something we can all relate to especially at the college age because there is a lot of transition into adulthood that is happening, yet we are still holding onto some childish things like getting an Easter basket. Alexis |
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sunrise service |
Mary wanders around |
Palm Sunday— |
Easter politics |
I really like this haiku, because I had a very similar experience during my sunrise service. At the Sarasota Jungle Gardens, I was expecting to face a lot of bird poop and noise, but surprisingly was very peaceful. It seemed as the service progressed, the more things livened up and brightened. I also like the visual effect that this haiku present alongside the written visual description. “sunrise service” is written at the top, and as the haiku progresses, the top line appears higher and higher. Noah |
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Reader responses to favorite matches.
home |
bright red hives |
I continue to |
hay flavored breath on my cheek |
little brother |
worse than my mother |
sister's grin lights up |
coffee in the morning |
coffee in the morning |
little brother |
inescapable |
little brother |
I enjoyed this pair of haiku from the matching contest because they remind me a lot of my little brother. Whenever I am away from him, I miss him but then when I am around him I cannot stand him. I also drink a lot of coffee and wake up before him. They both relate to families and brothers and give me the sense of being at home. They give me that "at home feeling" that is not always warm. The coffee haiku is warmer than the other haiku but the other haiku shows both sides of being home. When I am at home I am not always happy and I get annoyed easily by my brother. Even though I love being around my family, they can be annoying. I just like how I can feel both of those feelings from these haiku. Erica |
I matched these two haiku because they both relate to annoying family members. I feel like I can relate to this because whenever I am at school, I miss my family, but whenever I get home I can only take so much of them. I do love them, but a long car ride, or the antics of a younger sibling can really grind my gears. Jacob |
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sobbing |
inescapable |
trembling |
picking out an outfit |
time apart still best friends |
together we'll always be young |
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I really liked these one liners together because putting them together perfectly describes my relationships with my older friends. I had a best friend in Middle School that went to a different high school and college, so our visits tapered off. Over this past Winter Break, we met up and it was like it was our 7th grade prime all over again. We laughed about the stupidest things and acted as if no time had passed, even though it had been over a year and a half since we had last talked. These haiku really highlighted that the time passed separate almost ceases to exist when you're back together. Cori |
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time apart still best friends |
time stops |
she clutches her rosary |
together we'll always be young |
Really good friends don't show up that often but with life nowadays its almost guaranteed time with best friends won't last forever. The top haiku makes me think of all my best friends who are at different schools and how when we are back together it's like nothing has changed. I only have two friends like that from back home so going home is always a treat. The singular line and spacing of the first haiku is a way to appreciate the beauty is simplicity and the beauty of having a few close friends. I like how the second haiku reads with this as if time spent with those close friends makes time seem slower and ending breaks harder. Tyler |
I really liked this haiku for many reasons. First of all, since we wrote about spring break and Easter was involved in break, the religious side of this haiku really stuck out to me even though I am not Catholic. I also like how there could be two different stories or memories that are told in the final two lines. The reader can either think about the woman as a mother telling her daughter stories or the old woman getting stories told to her that she had forgotten in her old age. Michael |
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The rosary Haiku was my favorite in the entire Matching Contest. I connected to it the most not because I am going through something similar to the author, but because it painted such a vivid picture as to what was happening. I was able to understand the thoughts, feelings, and reactions of the person telling the stories. Put together with the second Haiku, it makes the first feel as though it is not so bad after all. The first Haiku seems to be talking about an old woman who is starting to forget about her past, something that nobody wants to experience. But, put together with the second, it gives you a sense of hope that even when you start to forget, someone will always remember for you. Lauren |
© 2016, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.