Haiku to Edit 1
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Spring 2018
cut (unneeded words)? • add (context, image, scene, kigo)?
replace (cut & add better word, phrase or image)? • rearrange furniture (lines, arrangement, order)?
quiet conversations
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a hill covered in snow |
sledding down the hill |
why am I alone
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the wind |
fall ball |
flannel jacket, levi jeans
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two braids |
it’s incredible |
handwritten note
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eerie moon |
so cold |
why must one decide
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the blade is gliding |
childrens' cheers |
no worries but t-ball
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ice covered paths |
boo |
phone off
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forgotten |
continual circles |
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