Haiku Kukai 8 Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Spring 2018
I call knowing you won't answer Kaitlyn Foster (11) This is a very sad haiku but I like it because of how emotional it is. This person misses someone so much that they would do anything to hear their voice, even call their old voicemail. They know they are dead and gone but they call anyway. They know this person would answer in a heartbeat if they could which I think makes them even more sad. I think anyone who has lost a close loved one can relate to this haiku because you miss that person so much. Lexi As the years go by I have slowly experienced the loss of someone who is of the same age as me. It was absolutely devastating. To have someone that you spent every weekend with making memories with all of your friends, just one day be taken from this world. Josh |
your perfume |
family cemetery |
family lake house |
something so precious Lexi Doss (12) I love this haiku a lot because it begins as something that is very deep and you start to think of things that are precious and that hurt you, and its pizza. I like the surprise ending. I honestly never would have thought that it would end this way, but I love it. I actually have a scar on my arm from burning myself on the oven door trying to get pizza out while in high school. Literally, something so precious burned me. Katie I enjoy this haiku because of the humor in it. Pizza is one of my favorite foods, so I'm always very excited to start eating it as soon as I get it. However, I have to remind myself to wait most of the time because of how hot it is. Morgan When I read this haiku it made me think of myself when I eat pizza. For starters, I absolutely love pizza, it's one my favorite foods to eat. I always get really excited whenever I'm about to bite into a slice of pizza that I forget that it may have just came right out of the oven and I might want to let it sit out for a while before I bite into it. However, this only really happens when it's on of my favorite pizza places. Alyssa |
following the dotted lines |
forty minute drive Katherine Goethals (6) I enjoy this haiku because of personal reasons. I have always commuted for college all 5 years. This has made for many trips back home. Not always a 40 minute drive, however as of now my drive is pretty close to an hour. If anything is forgotten, it is a very deep contemplation when deciding rather to go back or stay. I try to wake up in the morning and think about what I need to grab and walk around retracing my steps. This usually works pretty well, however I have 18 credit hours so there’s times when it doesn’t work. When this happens, it has to be a very critical thing if I forget something, and even then I may not go back for it. Katherine is dedicated to these pants though because you wouldn’t find me going back 40 min. for a pair of pants. Travis |
blankets covering |
screaming and banging |
stepping into the box Deion Corley (7) |
ocean wave Deion Corley I really liked this haiku because it reminds me of my family vacations. When my brother and I were little, we traveled quite a bit. Anywhere we went there were many pictures taken. When we would go to a beach, the tradition was to write the location in the sand along with the date and our names. My brother and I were always in these pictures and they are now all printed in a scrapbook at our home. Alyssa just shows that overtime nothing is permanent. It all eventually fades, its all about how you handle the eventual fading. Josh I liked this haiku because it reminds me of a new country song that has recently come out. This haiku brings the image of a couples love just being temporary or it just being a summer fling. Like with the waves taking away the names the summer takes away their love. Ryan |
under the Nashville stars |
prospering leaves Ryan McDonald A few weeks ago, a few buds of flowers started to grow back in my backyard. Then, more storms and snow hit Decatur, and I was afraid these flowers would get harmed or die. But to my surprise, they were completely fine. This is what I was reminded of when reading this haiku. The determination of these new plants could be paralleled to the determination of a couple, new or going through a new stage. There could be a lot of problems, but they hold on because they are growing through the winds instead of being wrecked by them. Rachel |
our darkest times Ryan McDonald This is a very relatable haiku. My family and I go camping a lot and our favorite part is building the campfire. It is so comforting and relaxing to sit by the fire and roast marshmallows and just stare deeply into the fire. The best conversations come from complete silence. I really like how the author used “darkest” and “sparked” to contrast each other. Sparked means light up and there are also sparks around a campfire so I like the play on words. Lexi |
a kick from inside Ryan McDonald (10) I found this haiku also very cute. The baby inside the mother's womb is gently reminding her not to eat unhealthy food. Often, during pregnancy a mother craves for such desserts and it is uncontrollable. But the baby is there to remind her. So, I found this haiku very sweet. Jesal |
under the stars |
my soul mate Kaitlyn Foster (11) This was a pretty funny haiku. I read this an immediately thought of one of my good friends who has been searching for his soul mate for the last 4 years, it just gave me a laugh! Deion |
football butts |
world war II |
she reaches Alyssa Rodriguez I really liked this haiku because of it sense of playfulness. A majority of the time a new relationship is sort of built on the chase, but this haiku is light and fun. Deion |
the kids surround Alyssa Rodriguez I like this haiku because it shows the fascination kids have with death AND how alien worms are. I believe that they are watching a worm on a sidewalk after a rain and that one of them will take pity and move it gently to the grass. This haiku ends, in my imagination with an act of compassion. Randy |
beer bottles Lexi Doss (11) When I read this haiku it made me think of someone going through a new chapter in their life. They partied, travelled, lived life to the fullest and now they have finally reached a point in their life where they needed to put the beer bottle down and exchange it for a baby bottle. They need to make more room for a little person in their life, one in which is going to need them to settle down. So, no more partying all the time, no more just getting up and traveling where ever they want to go. This is a new chapter in their life, one that involves a different kind of growing up. Alyssa Felt Response: I really enjoy this Haiku because it's the reality of life that you don't really notice until it's done and happened. One day you're drinking with your friend and maybe even with your significant other, then the babies come, and life changes just like that! This haiku has a mood of selflessness, like it's a statement rather than a complaint. Seems to me it's completely okay that the beer bottles turned into baby bottles. It reminds me of how precious life is and how fast time flies by! Enjoy all of those stages of life while you can. Kaitlyn |
doctor's news Lexi Doss (4) |
she closes the door |
purple pastel |
binge eating |
walking slower to class |
the gust of the wind |
floral patches |
she reads her a story |
sleeping together Lexi Doss (6) |
waiting . . . |
as you lie in the casket |
in the Poncho |
True Romance Travis Voorhees (3) |
snow on the ground |
i'm Kaitlyn Foster (10) |
I told the flowers Kaitlyn Foster (7) This haiku makes me think of the flowers as kind of a guard to someone's heart. A lover confessed how well they would treat and love that person, and after hearing the person's confession, the flowers opened up, by blooming, and are allowing the person to get close with the person they guard. Morgan |
hard pill to swallow |
walk with me |
watching the kids |
fluttering by |
masking what what |
coffee grounds Elizabeth Pillow (5) |
up and down Jesal Sheth (6) |
the ball falls |
opening presents |
my dog's leg Katherine Goethals I dog sat for my friend this weekend and his dog loves to cuddle. At night, the dog would fall asleep first and would snore so incredibly loud for such a small little guy. At one point, he even woke himself up because he was snoring so loud. In the middle of the night, he was dreaming and accidentally kicked me in the stomach as well. Ally
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table set up |
last call Joshua Mysliwjec (5) |
with all this school work |
the priest raises his chalice |
I retie his sneakers Rory Arnold (9) |
Frosty’s carrot nose Rory Arnold (12) |
camping |
his truck bed |
why such a big deal Kaitlyn Foster I like this haiku because I have always been a “tomboy.” When I was little, my friends were the girly girls and took lots of pride in being that way. Growing up around sports and with an older brother, I did not wish to be a girly-girl and I wanted to fit in with the boys. We live in the country and I would often go out in the fields and ditches barefoot and play in the mud with my dogs. I also always loved hunting down and catching creatures to bring back and show my parents. When we started hanging out with the neighbor kids, nothing changed. One time when we went fishing at the pond near our houses I was one of the only girls to touch the worm and put it on the hook. I was also one of the few that would touch the fish we caught as well. Ally |
tucked in bed |
sliding across the court |
snailman Morgan Bettner (5) |
a snake wriggles into view Andrew Cliatt (5) |
slowly waking up Andrew Cliatt (12) I find this haiku os relatable that it kind of hurts. I work full time, go to school full time, and I have an internship twice a week. Add a social life on top of all this and it is difficult to get enough sleep. At least once a week I wake up late and have to grab something to eat for breakfast and warm up coffee from yesterday. My heart literally stops for a second when I realize I overslept. Katie |
tiny trees |
in the back alley |
tumbling in the dryer Rachel Humphrey (5) |
a child’s glove |
cut off t-shirt Elizabeth Pillow (4) |
tension sifting |
clean laundry in bed Elizabeth Pillow (3) |
obstacles much larger |
hiding behind |
picking up sticks |
box of chalk |
first day of preschool |
my cat talks to me Travis Voorhees (11) I don’t believe I was the author of this haiku, however this is what Professor Brooks put down. So I will take it cause it’s a great one! If you like to imagine, or if you have ever been in a different mindset, your cat and you may have some conversations. This can become eventful and very interesting. Deep down we know that’s just our alter personality making up the things and accents of the cat, which is very interesting in my opinion. Not only are we having a conversation with our self, but we are putting a character with this other part of us. I think it’s funny how many people in class related to this particular haiku though. So maybe I’m not crazy. Travis |
caught again |
hair in a mess |
passing leaf |
front porch rocking |
grass spiders |
spring sunrise |
seams of the baseball Deion Corley (9) |
finger tips |
light rain Deion Corley (4) |
forgotten post-it Rachel Humphrey (8) |
running from his apartment |
a breeze in the fur |
discussing topics Morgan Bettner (8) |
brisk walk to class |
sweater in the morning |
while the earth |
the toddler lays Alyssa Rodriguez (8) I found this haiku extremely adorable! That's because I love babies and doggies so much that when they are seen together, I begin to cry. The imagery is so cute when a toddler is fast asleep with a dog next to her Both of them look so adorable together. Jesal |
conversations Alyssa Rodriguez (8) |
drinking away Morgan Bettner (9) This haiku makes me think about how much more relaxed we get when we drink, and it can often feel like a release. Within this release, sins are included. The more you drink, the more you forget, and so this person turns away from a religious attitude of prayer and forgiveness, and sees alcohol as a way of cleansing. This is funny due to the idea that drinking doesn’t change a thing. Rory |
flip flops and sandals |
wildfire roaring |
old comic books |
two pencils and a desk create Rory Arnold (4) |
unsatisfied needs Rory Arnold Felt Response: This Haiku reminds me of a girl who doesn't get enough attention, and for that reason seeks attention and compliments. Kind of like the idea that a girl who post selfies on social media all the time doesn't get enough attention so they look for it through likes of other people on her post. It makes me think that this girl for whatever reason has low self esteem and wants this person to write a special and heart felt poem about her. She's looking for something to fill her unsatisfied needs. Kaitlyn |
fingering the necklace |
shower |
softly tucking |
faking a smile— |
scalding coffee |
restless |
we make a cute couple |
daytime is mine Jesal Sheth I picture a couple where one is super busy during the day, and one is super busy at night, or where one person thrives during the day and the other at night. Midnight is the balance of theses two and where these two people come together. Relationships are about compromise, and this haiku accurately and simply portrays that aspect. It conveys that midnight is special because they share it. It is intimate and comforting. Rachel |
annoyed boyfriend |
spring baseball Allyson Isenhower (5) |
looking down from above Allyson Isenhower I liked this haiku for the love for someone though they are really gone. That the person is still overwatching them and taking care of them them secretly. The person still alive knows that so she rewards him with reconginzing his favorite flower. I like this haiku because it is emotionally delicate and has a lot of feeling behind it. Ryan |
empty diamond |
watermelon bowl |
yellow yachts |
red wine and cheesecake Jesal Sheth (5) This somber haiku reminds me of evenings where beauty comes with company. Though the nights may change, plans may become altered, as long as two people are sharing an evening together, then bliss is abounding. In this scene, I specifically see two individuals who were already planning a dinner, but thought that sharing dinner with the stars was far more romantic than a candle lit dinner table. Rory |
the wilted flower— |
white flakes |
buzzing phone |
the little girl sprinkles |
staring at a grave |
finally |
breaking out sandals |
car ride home |
windows opening |
painting her face |
his voice does to me Kaitlyn Foster (13) |
air dried hair |
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