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Global Haiku • Millikin University • Spring 2019
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ice rink . . . ice rink ice rink ice rink
ice rink . . . | a lonesome guitar a lonesome guitar a single guitar enjoying
The old guitar a single guitar |
leaving the classroom leaving the classroom leaving the classroom leaving the classroom
feelings of failure
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bell rings for recess recess bell rings recess recess
bell rings for recess bell rings |
bells ring downtown Christmas lights bells ring
bells ring snow falls |
woolen mittens skating past
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stacked books on night stand night stand books books unopened books surround me
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the children the students roam the children roam the children children on campus
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still I stand taillights vanish Here I stand without your voice standing alone I still stand tail lights disappearing
I stand here here I stand here I stand |
learning college
ramen noodles ramenĀ -- learning to appreciate newfound glory living on freedom
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kiss me one last time kiss me one last time couples laughing . . .
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people looking down all the time people looking people stuck
steak house |
alone in the cold stranded in the cold
alone alone in the cold... |
beer cans can of beer empty beer cans empty beer cans rusty beer cans old beer cans behind the couch
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fire in the chimney
enveloped in a blanket wrapped in a blanket fresh cut pine scent of pine fire crackles a smoldering fire place a smoldering fire place
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a movie ticket stub old ticket stub . . . a memory
our hands meet movie ticket her smile movie ticket sub movie ticket stubs a ticket stub |
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