Haiku Kukai 12 Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Spring 2020
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cars passing by Jared Chapman I enjoy this haiku because it reminds me of home. Our porch faces a road where cars pass by frequently. I enjoy hearing the different radios and engine sounds as they pass by for a moment. Sometimes you even hear a moment of conversation or singing. On nice days I always bring my water bottle and a book onto the porch, usually my dog is close at my heels and we enjoy the weather. This haiku allows me to reminisce on those peaceful and quiet moments. Shania Dvorak, Spring 2020 |
empty room— Morgan Timmons I love this haiku. Usually when I lose one earring, I give up on the hope of ever finding it again. It's always exciting when it pops up where you would least expect it. I feel like this person wasn't looking for it, but they found it. I picture an empty room because they are moving out, and then they find this earring that brings back so many memories of the night that she wore it. Hope Klessig, Spring 2020 |
my blanket hugs me Jared Chapman I likes this haiku because I found it to be very relatable during this time. Lots of people are sheltered in place and not able to see their loved ones. Some people could be hugging a blanket instead of their loved one or this blanket could be a gift from their loved one. However this is significant to the reader I think this haiku is very comforting. Hannah Watts, Spring 2020 |
I braid my own hair Grace Newton I enjoyed this haiku because I can relate to it and I just like the playfulness that I see in it. I imagine long french braids in brown hair, the sun is shining down and the flyaways are so vividly pointed out by the sun. When I read the haiku, I feel that this person is happy that they are alone, only with themselves and their flyaways. Morgan Timmons, Spring 2020 |
on zoom |
full moon Dalton Glasco |
through the years |
in a field of yellow Shania Dvorak I enjoy the pop of color in this haiku. It catches the ear like it catches the eye if it were being viewed through the eye. The warmth of these colors helps you feel the season turn from spring to summer as well. A light warm yellow color as a pop of red hot color starts to enter. |
the waves Taylor Parola |
she plays chess Hope Klessig I enjoyed this haiku because it reminded me a lot of myself. I’ve always been the type of person to play chess and not checkers in life. Also, I’m the only child and I’ve had to play several different games alone because I didn’t have any siblings to play with. Jada Miller, Spring 2020 |
the crackle Hope Klessig |
global pandemic Pascaline Muhindagiga This haiku made me kinda sad after I read it, and makes me want the world to go back to normal. After leaving school directly after spring break was very surreal to me, and it didn’t fully hit me until a couple weeks later. I just feel like we have been on an extended spring break this entire time. The situation that has been going on for months now, has completely changed the way we live our lives. It still doesn’t feel like this situation is real, and I hope it’s just a bad dream! I miss being at school with my friends, and miss going to class everyday. This haiku was well written, and makes me want this pandemic over and done with. Erika Castanon, Spring 2020 |
blanket of nighttime Olivia Tharpe I sit and reflect on this haiku at the dawn of its arrival. I stay up with restless nights with no sleep and ponder at life and the world around me. It is an amazing thing that I have no hard time waking up and feeling refreshed everyday after. When the night ends well in thought the next day seems like I slept for hours. A night of sadness and stress makes the next day feel like I never even slept. |
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empty bedroom Olivia Tharpe |
lonely— |
the peaceful garden Ashley Christensen I really enjoyed this haiku because I was able to relate my life to it. Ever since I’ve been home I feel like I’m on summer break. I fill my days with helping my mom around the house, and doing puzzles. I’ve been completely avoiding my homework and waiting until the last minute to do it. I have never been a procrastinator, but during this quarantine I’ve had no motivation. I keep myself busy and occupied most of the days, but I never find myself doing homework. This haiku was very calming to me, because I love to garden when I’m stressed out. The author still made this person sound productive, because they are out working in the garden. Erika Castanon, Spring 2020 |
the dog Ashley Christensen Being the owner of a dog, I often sit back and watch Duke sleep. Duke is a tri-color boxer and husky mix. When Duke enters a deep sleep, he tends to shake as if he’s having a seizure and I often wonder what is going on in his mind, if anything during that time. I once was worried and called his veterinarian doctor, but she ensured me that nothing was wrong, he is only dreaming! Jada Miller, Spring 2020 |
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workout Dalton Glasco |
stay-at-home, Dalton Glasco |
the way the sun shines Jared Chapman |
visiting hours are over |
hallucinating |
my fingertips calloused Grace Newton This haiku is so introspective. I love that the author leads us on by having us assume that they’re playing for someone else, when all of a sudden, the third line brings us in to tell us that they’re playing for themself. It’s sacrifice, it’s love, it’s admiration and dedication. I can hear, feel, and feel t his haiku and I love it! Niki Curatti, Spring 2020 |
burning supper Hope Klessig |
indulge in self-care |
i wish on every star |
morning of the funeral Kevin Escobar |
puzzle pieces— Morgan Timmons This haiku was really relatable, and in that same way, very very sad. I’m going back to Decatur this weekend to move more of my belongings from where I lived this year—my sorority house—into different storage. It’s kind of heartbreaking knowing I lost a whole semester in my sorority house, because I’ll never live there again. Packing my boxes up is like ending a chapter of my life and it’s hard to go through. Grace Newton, Spring 2020 |
black sharpie on the box— Morgan Timmons This haiku was very sensory for me. I could smell the sharpie and hear it as the person was writing on the cardboard. I see beautiful handwriting in cursive, but it is rushed. I have recently been helping my sister move into her new house and I have seen this exact image several times this week. Jared Chapman, Spring 2020 |
she looks |
baby pictures— Morgan Timmons This haiku was one of my favorites because of the light heartedness that is behind it. The word choice fit perfectly with what the author was going for. “The chunky cheeks” was my favorite line. This line made me smile and wrapping the haiku up with “she still wears” gave the haiku meaning. I read the haiku as someone looking through baby photos of a loved one and still seeing the similarities between them grown up and as an infant. Taylor Parola, Spring 2020 |
what does it take |
insanity grows |
cancer ribbon Jared Chapman I enjoyed this one because my mom just recently finished treatment for breast cancer. I think this haiku can represent the amount of courage and determination that one has in order to go through treatment for cancer. You can tell by reading this that the individual is proud to be wearing that ribbon because it represents their fight against cancer and they are celebrating that they are one step closer to conquering this journey. Ashley Christenson, Spring 2020 This haiku made me just feel full - full of love, joy, happiness, confidence, beauty, and everything in between. I can imagine a woman coming out of the hospital from her last infusion, with the pink ribbon on her sweater, and she has just a look of relief and glow to her. I believe that this haiku shows the person is proud of themselves, and they are feeling more confident in themselves than ever before. Morgan Timmons, Spring 2020 |
whispers Paige Boomer |
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Karumi |
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in the morning |
bubbly Taylor Parola |
harmonious commotion Hailey Wimberly |
sunlight peeking through Morgan Timmons |
my sister giggles |
in the airport Grace Newton |
a short prayer Hope Klessig |
merry-go-round Hope Klessig |
take a breath Paige Boomer I really like this haiku because one I went out to the park in my hometown and I just ate sushi and it was one of the best days I have ever had. It was so peaceful and I loved it so much. Paige Boomer, Spring 202 |
school is out Ashley Christensen I enjoyed this haiku because it reminds me of the excitement associated with the last day of school as a child. My friends in the neighborhood and I would always run home from school on the last day with our backpacks filled with stuff from the school year. As soon as we would get home we would all throw our backpacks at our front door and go play with each other outside of someone’s house. Then, we were always excited to be done with school but now that I am close to graduating college, I feel that I won’t be excited to be officially finished with school. Ashley Christenson, Spring 2020 This haiku was also one of my favorites because it made me excited for the semester to be over. It has definitely been difficult switching to online. I am not an online learner, so It has been a huge struggle. Being so close to being done is very exciting. This haiku gave the reminder to keep working hard because we are so close to being done! Taylor Parola, Spring 2020 |
raising our arms |
porchlight shines Jared Chapman This haiku reminds me of a movie. When the sun sets, the rain pours, and it is just two people dancing together. They do not worry about who is around them, or what is going on in the world. At that moment it is just the two of them. It was a nice calming haiku that gives you a very clear sense of what you see and hear. I can almost smell the rain, as well. The overall feeling of this haiku is peaceful, and loving. Bre Johnson, Spring 2020 This haiku sums Karumi up beautifully! I love that there are multiple people in this haiku. I love that I can smell, hear, and feel the rain. I love that I can hear the music. I love that I can see the light radiating off of the porch and being absorbed by the rain drops. I love I love I love! Great haiku! Niki Curatti, Spring 2020 This haiku is beautifully written, and it brought me to a very specific vision. This haiku brought me to a couple cooped up during quarantine, taking a moment to find beauty in the world for a moment. I imagine them sitting on the porch watching a storm roll in and when it begins to rain, he reaches out his hand and they begin to dance in the rain. I love this haiku; it is so beautiful and peaceful. It makes me happy. Shania Dvorak, Spring 2020 |
fruit blossoms |
woodsy walk |
sunshine Pascaline Muhindagiga |
thunder storm Hope Klessig |
feeling blue Shania Dvorak I love the use of the colors and feelings in this haiku. It's so easy for girls to cover up their feelings with make up. Without make up, people can tell I'm sick or have been crying, but the second I put some foundation and blush on, they have no clue what I'm feeling. This haiku is light and fluffy, but it has a deep meaning behind it. Hope Klessig, Spring 2020 |
quidditch match Shania Dvorak I am a huge Harry Potter fan and can visualize several scenes from the films when reading this haiku. I love that the quidditch match and Gryffindor are separated by a line describing a couple cuddling on the couch. It makes it seem as though it isn’t really about the match or watching the movie, it is the fact that they are doing it together. I think this haiku was well-constructed and wholesome.Jared Chapman, Spring 2020 |
corona season— Dalton Glasco |
driving down |
return to the ocean |
we sit Erika Castanon I have been having a lot of dreams recently where I live on a farm and I own horses. And now I just want to live on a farm and own horses and ride them around the countryside. Paige Boomer, Spring 202
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after school Hope Klessig This haiku made me feel better after reading the last one haha! I like the innocence of it. It takes me back to a much simpler time in life, when the most romantic thing in the world was a kiss after school, or your hardest trouble was that they didn’t have what you liked for lunch. I feel like this haiku just takes me back to a time in my life when things were a hell of a lot easier. Grace Newton, Spring 2020 |
one little paw Hope Klessig This haiku caught my attention because I love puppy chow. I also find puppy chow so much fun to make because it's very easy. I think it's cute how this yummy treat was incorporated with dogs and paw prints as well. Overall this haiku makes me very happy and makes me want to fix puppy chow. Hannah Watts, Spring 2020 |
birds chirping Erika Castanon |
the dawn appears Bre Johnson |
2 bats Hannah Watts |
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