(select
your top 3 or 4 favorites)
Haiku Writing Roundtable--Kukai 1, Fall 2002
strong
aroma |
waiting
on the waitress Nikki Garry (2) |
cool autumn breezes, hot cider warms the heart Maureen Yates (3) |
bathed
in hot water Candace Golden (3) I just like the surprising last line. I read the first two lines and hit the pause, and I picture someone after a hard day or work or something in the tub or shower relaxing. Then there's the tea bag in the cup image. I just like it because the imagery seems contradicting and I like it that way. Travis Meisenheimer |
morning breeze a warm blanket (cocoas mist) |
around
the bonfire Brock Peoples (3) I really like this one because it presents the sense of warmth in two different ways. We get the sensory warmth from the bonfire an external warmth, we get the warmth of emotion of the love between brothers an internal warmth so to speak, and then we have the warmth of the cider that combines both the internal warmth (drinking it) with the external (feeling the warmth in your hands through the cup). Maureen Yates |
hot chocholate
|
hot chai Stacy Radliff (3) This was my favorite out of the hot drinks kukai. The author used such vivid words that give such a detailed description. I can see the steam dancing above the cup. And I see a group of friends all huddled together on a cold day trying desperately to keep warm, moving from side to side. Andrea Roewe |
ice on
the window pane |
floating
along Candace Golden (2) |
the whipped
topping Nikki Garry (2) This poem reminds me of Austin Powers. I see this girl drinking cocoa with whipped cream, and she has this huge gob of whipped cream on her nose. She has no clue its there and no ones telling her. James Osmun |
by the
fire visiting Maureen Yates (2) |
heavy
tea cups |
monday
morning |
Lying
on the sofa |
On top
of the mug |
at
sundown Randy Brooks This image is nice and relaxed, unlike my past week! It's a comforting image of two lovers discussing their day with each other while enjoying the sunset and some coffee. This was my favorite out of all of them, once I realized the one I originally picked was my own. Ooops. Brock Peoples I like the setting of this poem without the hot drinks. I know that hot drinks are the basis for the poem, but they take away from the wonderful picture that is left without them. James Osmun What I enjoyed about this image was it's simplistic beauty! It was more about the people, than the coffee, but what is interesting is the ritual or act of drinking, consuming together, and sharing life. Stephanie Lovelass |
coffee
brews Travis Meisenheimer (2) |
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2002, Randy Brooks Millikin University
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