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Haiku Writing Roundtable--Final Senryu Kukai, Fall 2002
my mother
checks Candace
Golden (5) "I absolutely love this image of the mother in another mans mirror because checking ones make-up is a regular superficial reality and the image of another mans mirror with this common image enhances the normalcy even more. The drama of this piece is absolutely perfect. Of all of the senryu, this is by far my favorite." --Stefanie Lovelass |
Sitting
in the dark Travis Meisenheimer |
turquoise
beads Stefanie Lovelass |
faded
cigarette Stacy Radliff |
ignoring
him, Nikki Garry (2) |
spicy
asparagus, |
mesa-top Brock Peoples |
smiling
face Stacy Radliff |
moving
miscellaneous |
brown
yarn |
trying to fit in her beautiful bangs hide her blue eyes |
darkness James Osmun |
down
the escalator E.
Kreydich (6) |
first trip home,
a funeral Brock Peoples |
staring
at shoes |
Sitting
on the porch Travis Meisenheimer |
its over. Andrea Roewe (2) |
Sunday morning Brock Peoples (2) |
reaching
out to her |
jagged
swollen scar Stefanie Lovelass (2) |
around the camp
fire |
all eyes
on me Nikki Garry (2) |
the one
thing Stacy Radliff (2)
|
the potter
|
across
the table Nikki Garry (2) "I like this "across the table" haiku because of the interesting situation presented. The two people are in a situation where they are not familiar and the guy (who is presumably the more nervous one) is being cool, while his glass is sweating as the meal continues and his date remaining nervous. I just like this imagery." Travis Meisenheimer |
the babe's
baptism Nikki Garry |
deep in the pocket Sarah Scheck (3) "I really like this haiku. Its one that almost anyone could relate to finding a dollar bill that you didn't know was in your pocket at a time that you need it most." Nikki Garry |
a scream of terror Sarah Scheck |
gravity is stronger |
dog sniffs under
chair Sarah Scheck (2) "I absolutely howled (ok pun intended) at the image of the cat defending her territory from the inquisitive dog, and the use of the term "bitch slapped" made the image perfect. I can almost see the expression on the cat's face, the indignation in her eyes at this damn dog's temerity, and the confusion in the dog's expression as he backs away quickly with a little yip of pain and surprise." Stacy Radliff |
sitting
by the phone Andrea Roewe (2) |
declining to
give blood Brock
Peoples
(4) |
scent
of heaven |
doorbell
rings Andrea Roewe |
pink
sponge tips |
four
years of silence |
communal
gallon Stefanie Lovelass (2) |
peaceful sitting |
head
full of weave Nikki Garry |
your
new recliner Elisabeth Kreydich |
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2002, Randy Brooks Millikin University
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