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Haiku Roundtable Fall 2002
Dr. Randy Brooks |
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MORE
SERENITY
by
Nikki Garry
I
began writing writing haiku in the spring of 2002. Since
then I have seen my work progress and grow. In general,
I write my haiku and senryu about personal experiences,
specific topics, or from random thoughts. In addition, I
typically use some punctuation in my work.
If
I had to give three tips on writing haiku, they would be:
- have
fun,
- be
creative, and
- lastly
be open to constructive criticism.
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Reading
Partner's Response:
Nikki's
haiku are very natural and simplistic. She is reflective
of her own experiences and tries to translate that to
others thorugh her typically meditative words. She writes
in a very woman-centered style of first glances, soft
infants, and her surroundings in a mild manner.
Elisabeth
Kreydich
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she
tosses the penny . . .
only to find
the well dry
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the
babe's baptism
water dribbles
down her cheek
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all
eyes on me
as I enter the weight-room
in need of a spotter
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ignoring
him,
I walk with confidence
hoping he notices
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across
the table
his glass sweats
more than I do
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fallen
leaves
I begin
a fresh start
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bare
tree branches
sway in the wind
with nothing to hide
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©2002
Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights
reserved for original authors
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