EN170 Haiku Roundtable • Fall 2002
Dr. Randy Brooks
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MORE SERENITY

by
Nikki Garry

I began writing writing haiku in the spring of 2002. Since then I have seen my work progress and grow. In general, I write my haiku and senryu about personal experiences, specific topics, or from random thoughts. In addition, I typically use some punctuation in my work.

If I had to give three tips on writing haiku, they would be:

  1. have fun,
  2. be creative, and
  3. lastly be open to constructive criticism.

Reading Partner's Response:

Nikki's haiku are very natural and simplistic. She is reflective of her own experiences and tries to translate that to others thorugh her typically meditative words. She writes in a very woman-centered style of first glances, soft infants, and her surroundings in a mild manner.

—Elisabeth Kreydich


she tosses the penny . . .
     only to find
     the well dry


the babe's baptism—
water dribbles
down her cheek


all eyes on me
as I enter the weight-room
in need of a spotter

 

 

ignoring him,
I walk with confidence
hoping he notices


across the table
his glass sweats
more than I do

 

 

fallen leaves—
I begin
a fresh start


bare tree branches
sway in the wind
with nothing to hide

 

©2002 Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights reserved for original authors