EN170
Haiku Roundtable Fall 2002
Dr. Randy Brooks |
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Travis Meisenheimer
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13
RANDOM
HAIKU
by
Travis Meisenheimer
I
chose this title for various reasons. I feel that this sense
of randomness fits my collection because my topics range from
the important things like football and beer to relationships,
death, friendship and alcoholism. As my reading partner pointed
out, my haiku have a message that can't be learned from a
casual readingone must dig deeper he says to find it.
I chose these lucky 13 because they reflect merandom
and unpredictable.
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Reading
Partner's Response
Most
of Travis' haiku I have read seem to have a thought-provoking
message. The meanings are not initially apparent, but
must be further dug into. Travis' signature haiku:
coffee
brews
I remain asleep
why are YOU here?
gives
the reader a setting of early morning. Someone the author
knows but doesn't want there at that moment is making
coffee. The author wants to sleep, but he smells the aroma
of the coffee brewing, and that how he knows the person
is still there.
Andrew
Kirchgesner
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sitting
on the porch
pile of beer cans
silence
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hallowed
ground
desecrated
he turns away
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alone
by the fire
she shivers
fading as the day
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reaching
out to her
she refuses
. . . falling further
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sitting
in the dark
at the glow of the monitor
the face of creation
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freezing
rain
sniffles
we warm each other
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©2002
Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights
reserved for original authors
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