EN170
Haiku Writing Roundtable
Dr. Randy Brooks
Millikin University Fall 2003 |
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Travis
Meisenheimer
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rearviewmirror
Selected Haiku
by
Travis
Meisenheimer
This
collection of haiku was written during the autumn semester
of my fifth year of university studies. In some ways it reflects
this time in my life. The title "rearviewmirror"
is an interesting metaphor that represents this gathering
of haiku. A rearviewmirror (one word, all lower case) is,
as we all know, used to look at what we have just passed while
driving . . . history.
This
collection gets its name from a song by Pearl Jam. In this
song the author writes, "saw things . . . clearer . .
. once you were in my . . . rearviewmirror." Though I
am using this title, I have a slightly different meaning,
more akin to "saw things . . . clearer . . .
once [insert object] were in my . . . rearviewmirror."
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Though
I may not be exactly remembering someone or some event in
my haiku, I am obviously remembering something. I see the
creation of poetry like looking at things in the rearviewmirror.
You see something that elicits some emotion and then you think
about it . . . work out all the small
details in your mind and then you look back at it again. This
time around you are in a different place and you are looking
back in your mind's eye. But it is only a reflection of the
moment. That is what you see and that is what you write.
At
least, that's my take on it. This is a collection of haiku
that fit that idea of reflection on the past. Enjoy.
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alone
at the game
he watches
the past
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her
cold hands
become warm
in his
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your
last words
your first words
all lies
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dirty
mirror
i don't recognize
the face
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never
stopping
she waves to me
in the rearview mirror
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©2003
Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights
reserved for original authors
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