Read and enjoy each haiku, then compare haiku next to each other, selecting one to move forward in the competition. Write the first line of the selected haiku in the line above or below the pair, then continue with the matching comparison readings until you select one top top top champion. |
attempting
to sleep the smell of the candle just put out |
lighting
a candle before the Virgin . . . the flame dies |
on
the doorstep our first "I love you's" as friends |
first
date . . . wearing flip-flops to match his height |
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the candy
bowl empty Mom turns off the porch light |
October night from the orange lights one bulb m[]ssing |
autumn drizzle among leftover pumpkins a mouse scurries |
grocery shopping running with a pumpkin to catch the bus |
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an echo bouncing off the canyon walls my eyes squint upwards |
sitting still hearing what the house hears when i'm gone |
gentle reminder hung on the door --breathe-- |
Notre Dame
cathedral the whispers of atheists |
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home again just for a visit chores |
your chicken-scratch absent from the shopping list |
walking through the woods alone ah . . . a mushroom |
the leaves
crunch behind me not my footsteps . . . |
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both
of us drunk finding an alley only you get to pee |
at
a party two guys compare the length of their nipple hair |
jeans
and a hoodie dirty hair in a knot he tells me i'm beautiful |
at
the concert fingers intertwined during our song |
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the big game a cup of hot chocolate warms my mittens |
rainy day empty coffee mug slowly losing heat |
waking up--in
a new home same old dog at the foot of the bed |
home for summer my cat runs from me |
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drops of water cover the glass blind the way home |
gravel dust |
an insult
said the circle fills laughter |
frosty night seven hopeful princesses aboard their convertible chariots |
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to be myself
. . . simply to be with you |
sitting across
the table from you so glad you're home |
you won't
call now I can't concentrate |
returning
home taking down memories of you |
© 2004,
Randy Brooks Millikin University
All rights returned to authors upon publication.