Haiku Kukai 5
Haiku Writing Roundtable--Kukai 5, Fall 2005
(Select 10-15 favorite haiku, and write a ¶ of imagined response to 2 favorites.)
quiet winter night |
shattered picture frame |
Kentucky rain Raquel Burns (4) |
old jacket Carrie Seymour I like this haiku because it represents something that has a lot of memories to it and seems to be something handed down from father to son and will be treasured when the dad or whoever is no longer around anymore. Anthony |
cupped in father's open hand |
in the suspended hand Josh Wild (4) |
Thanksgiving grocery shopping Rick Bearce (3) |
cold, cold night |
cold November night |
waiting by the phone Mark Beanblossom I like this haiku because I believe that everyone is able to relate to different situations similar to this. Some time or another, someone has let us down by not showing up to take us to the park or coming to our performances. even though some people have let us down, holding it against them won't solve anything and we have to enjoy the times when people haven't let us down. Anthony |
so many winters |
picking his brain Carrie Seymour |
imagining it without the crack |
our first Christmas Joanne Weise (2) |
all these years |
Old quilt Deirdre Fields (4) This haiku gives me a beautiful image of a floating blanket. I love the romantic motivation behind the boyfriend floating an old quilt over his girlfriend. It shows sentimentality and loving care. I can just see the multi-colored patchwork squares of the quilt rippling back and forth... Raquel
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aroused-- |
so many memories |
tattered paperback Raquel Burns (5) |
my favorite t-shirt Mark Beanblossom (4) I really like this haiku. I t remind me of my favorite pair of jeans that I have had for like four three. And although they have holes in them I just can seem to let them go. I think that everyone can relate to this haiku because at some point or another everyone has an item that they love and cannot get rid even though it is too little. Alicia K. |
traveling a lot of miles |
strike one, strike two |
on the ground Rick Bearce (2) |
after work Joanne Weise (6) I can totally relate to this haiku, especially during final exams week. Oftentimes when I am hyper-focused and driven in rehearsal, in performance, with an assignment, et cetera, I forget about my hunger. My grumbling stomach has to remind me to re-fuel it! I very much enjoyed the haiku's comical use of enjambment as the lines go: "remembering i was hungry / three hours ago" Raquel |
broken e string |
jumps and twirls Alicia Kelly (2) |
rusted car |
night before graduation |
family talk time Raquel Burns (4) |
dark ring |
first one up-- Joanne Weise (2) |
the guy on the penny Anthony Holeyfield |
week before Christmas— Rick Bearce (5) This haiku reminds me of a few weeks ago went I went to Wal-Mart and the Salvation Army man was out there ringing his bell as everyone walked by and avoided him. So many people avoid them and yet, they are still so jolly. Alicia K. |
argument |
last week |
tarnished old mirror |
up and down |
just me Joanne Weise (3) |
girls' night in-- Joanne Weise (3) |
cross-legged on the mountaintop |
crowded elevator Joanne Weise (3) |
poor little haiku |
8 ball corner pocket |
hot wheels Joanne Weise (2) |
my grandma Mark Beanblossom (5) |
porch settin' |
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old classmate |
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