baking cookies
with grandma,
stealing bites of dough,
some things we
don't grow out of
Ben Williamson |
sitting at the counter
Grandma’s Famous Gravy
I call Dibs
everybody cutting in line
in a race to the microwave
Lauren Rhodes |
fresh cranberries
have no place here
we salute the almighty can
in the shape of a hockey puck
comes my salvation
Lauren Rhodes |
an ordinary night
around the kitchen table
stitches in my side
the laughter we share
this I long for in the late hours
Ben Williamson |
baking cookies
with grandma,
stealing bites of dough,
some things we
don't grow out of |
fresh cranberries
have no place here
we salute the almighty can
in the shape of a hockey puck
comes my salvation |
|
baking cookies
with grandma,
stealing bites of dough,
some things we
don't grow out of
top
quarter champion |
|
TOP half Chamption
baking cookies
with grandma,
stealing bites of dough,
some things we
don't grow out of
|
bottom
quarter champion
hissing pots galore
bubbling gravy to be devoured
purple eggplants line the walls
she calls my name
Amen
|
hissing pots galore
bubbling gravy to be devoured
purple eggplants line the walls
she calls my name
Amen
|
honey baked ham glistening away
simmering pots of sauces plus sides
seconds, thirds even
falling asleep anywhere
everything tastes better as leftovers
|
nostrils filled with
the smells of a feast
"fit for a king"
says mother as she pulls
the bird out of the oven
Ben Williamson |
hissing pots galore
bubbling gravy to be devoured
purple eggplants line the walls
she calls my name
Amen
Lauren Rhodes |
honey baked ham glistening away
simmering pots of sauces plus sides
seconds, thirds even
falling asleep anywhere
everything tastes better as leftovers
Lauren Rhodes |
Trying
to get scraps
from underneath
"No, Rusty!"
every time . . .
Kathryn Coffey |
|
TOP
half champion
|
|
Champion & GRAND CHAMPION
baking cookies
with grandma,
stealing bites of dough,
some things we
don't grow out of
|
BOTTOM
half champion |
The mother
thankful to have
thankful for god
on earth
the guardian angel
Bemajedareki Williams |
So many
without a home
and many things
we have taken
for granted
Kathryn Coffey |
Chicken and dumplings
simmering, sweet
beautiful crockpot
ah, Nana,
it’s been too long
Kathryn Coffey |
Grandma's house
again?
like last year
won't Grandpa
get lonely?
Kathryn Coffey |
So many
without a home
and many things
we have taken
for granted |
Chicken and dumplings
simmering, sweet
beautiful crockpot
ah, Nana,
it’s been too long |
|
So many
without a home
and many things
we have taken
for granted
top
quarter champion |
|
BOTTOM
half champion
watching my
young cousins
chase each other,
the boundless energy
I had many years ago
|
bottom
quarter champion
watching my
young cousins
chase each other,
the boundless energy
I had many years ago
|
in a coma
not of this realm
knocked out
by four pm
drooling
|
watching my
young cousins
chase each other,
the boundless energy
I had many years ago
|
I can feel . . .
the stuffing
in my estomago
in my face
slowing not moving
Bemajedareki Williams |
in a coma
not of this realm
knocked out
by four pm
drooling
Lauren Rhodes |
the family
their voices
in a food coma
taking over
slowly, but surely
Bemajedareki Williams |
watching my
young cousins
chase each other,
the boundless energy
I had many years ago
Ben Williamson |
© 2017, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
as the sun's rays drop
below the tree-line,
rod-tips dance
in mesmerizing unison as
nothing but current tugs the line
Ben Williamson |
trudging through
head high wild grass
double barrel tucked under arm
two cock pheasants
in my field vest
Ben Williamson |
cool summer night
fire pit roaring with life
burning marshmallows
as the light fades,
the conversations grow
Ben Williamson |
in the distance
mountainous terrain
silence
the sound
of serenity
Norman Mears |
as the sun's rays drop
below the tree-line,
rod-tips dance
in mesmerizing unison as
nothing but current tugs the line |
cool summer night
fire pit roaring with life
burning marshmallows
as the light fades,
the conversations grow |
|
cool summer night
fire pit roaring with life
burning marshmallows
as the light fades,
the conversations grow
top
champion |
|
Back Page Chamption
cool summer night
fire pit roaring with life
burning marshmallows
as the light fades,
the conversations grow
|
bottom
champion
packed car
tunes on, snack bag packed
smooshed sardines in a clown car
a day on the open road
turns into night
|
packed car
tunes on, snack bag packed
smooshed sardines in a clown car
a day on the open road
turns into night
|
her eyes
speak of happiness
in her hair
a lone daisy
adds to her beauty
|
just an old farm truck
240 grand on the odometer
the smell of burnt diesel
on our blackened hands
as we turn wrenches together
Ben Williamson |
packed car
tunes on, snack bag packed
smooshed sardines in a clown car
a day on the open road
turns into night
Lauren Rhodes |
her eyes
speak of happiness
in her hair
a lone daisy
adds to her beauty
Norman Mears |
misty afternoon
at it's peak
the feeling of fall
we kiss
beneath the willows
Norman Mears |
© 2017, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.
baking cookies
with grandma,
stealing bites of dough,
some things we
don't grow out of
Ben Williamson |
fresh cranberries
have no place here
we salute the almighty can
in the shape of a hockey puck
comes my salvation
Lauren Rhodes |
sitting at the counter
Grandma’s Famous Gravy
I call Dibs
everybody cutting in line
in a race to the microwave
Lauren Rhodes |
an ordinary night
around the kitchen table
stitches in my side
the laughter we share
this I long for in the late hours
Ben Williamson |
This match is so much fun. I absolutely love the cranberry tanka, cranberry sauce is one of my favorite Thanksgiving foods so it was a fun take on it. The cookie tanka is so heartwarming and while I personally couldn't relate to it, I completely feel the nostalgic atmosphere that it creates. Together, they just form a super fun and cute set of poems. Hannah |
|
|
|
|
|
|
nostrils filled with
the smells of a feast
"fit for a king"
says mother as she pulls
the bird out of the oven
Ben Williamson |
hissing pots galore
bubbling gravy to be devoured
purple eggplants line the walls
she calls my name
Amen
Lauren Rhodes |
honey baked ham glistening away
simmering pots of sauces plus sides
seconds, thirds even
falling asleep anywhere
everything tastes better as leftovers
Lauren Rhodes |
Trying
to get scraps
from underneath
"No, Rusty!"
every time . . .
Kathryn Coffey |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
The mother
thankful to have
thankful for god
on earth
the guardian angel
Bemajedareki Williams |
So many
without a home
and many things
we have taken
for granted
Kathryn Coffey |
Chicken and dumplings
simmering, sweet
beautiful crockpot
ah, Nana,
it’s been too long
Kathryn Coffey |
Grandma's house
again?
like last year
won't Grandpa
get lonely?
Kathryn Coffey |
|
|
|
|
|
|
the family
their voices
in a food coma
taking over
slowly, but surely
Bemajedareki Williams |
|
I can feel . . .
the stuffing
in my estomago
in my face
slowing not moving
Bemajedareki Williams |
in a coma
not of this realm
knocked out
by four pm
drooling
Lauren Rhodes |
baking cookies
with grandma
stealing bites of dough
some things we
don't grow out of
Ben Williamson |
watching my
young cousins
chase each other,
the boundless energy
I had many years ago
Ben Williamson |
Of all the pairings presented in the matching contest, I like Lauren's and Ben's pairing the most. For a moment, I thought ‘in a coma' was Ben's, but as it turned out, it was Lauren's. And vice a versa. Guess it goes to show how far one can come in the Tanka business: having your work being mistaken for someone else's. Nevertheless, I like how both Tanka pieces tackle to relatable problem of having a food coma. Kathryn |
This first one brought me back to visiting my grandmother. She was always making something. From 3 to 30, I would still steal bits of dough and still get yelled at for it. I see this second one with my nephew. I'm the one who rolls around and plays with him. So much energy for a three year old. After awhile, I can't anymore and he still runs and jumps. Norm |
|
|
|
|
as the sun's rays drop
below the tree-line,
rod-tips dance
in mesmerizing unison as
nothing but current tugs the line
Ben Williamson |
trudging through
head high wild grass
double barrel tucked under arm
two cock pheasants
in my field vest
Ben Williamson |
cool summer night
fire pit roaring with life
burning marshmallows
as the light fades,
the conversations grow
Ben Williamson |
in the distance
mountainous terrain
silence
the sound
of serenity
Norman Mears |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
just an old farm truck
240 grand on the odometer
the smell of burnt diesel
on our blackened hands
as we turn wrenches together
Ben Williamson |
packed car
tunes on, snack bag packed
smooshed sardines in a clown car
a day on the open road
turns into night
Lauren Rhodes |
her eyes
speak of happiness
in her hair
a lone daisy
adds to her beauty
Norman Mears |
misty afternoon
at it's peak
the feeling of fall
we kiss
beneath the willows
Norman Mears |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
© 2017, Randy Brooks Millikin University. All rights returned to authors upon publication.