Haiku Kukai 01 Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2022
1 fresh teabag |
2 the coffee, like a lie, |
3 thin pages Olivia Swords (7) I loved this haiku, not only because it brought back many memories of my late great-grandmother, but also felt quite nostalgic. Growing up visiting my G.G. 's quaint little apartment, her serving us juice or crackers and cheese, and of course orange sherbert. I remember her thick, well-worn bible sitting in the corner on a coffee table, her entire closet filled with old bibles (thinking about it now, there was most likely only a few, but it felt like she had an entire bible bookstore.) The smell of bitter yet weak coffee, her twisted, arthritis-ridden fingers, soft and silk-like, lovingly pinching my cheeks or giving me a firm embrace. I remember the smell, the haiku evoked so many sensory images for me: between the crinkling of thin pages, the pruny soft skin, and the damp and musty smell of worn pages stained with coffee. Maddy Cummins, Fall 2022 When listening to the thoughts of others who enjoyed this haiku in class, I found that a lot of my peers had different ideas and interpretation of the haiku than I did (which is totally natural, haiku is for the listener to interpret). I kept trying to see their perspective of an old book with stains in it maybe in some type of coffee shop or bookstore, but I just wasn't interpreting it the same way. When I hear these words, it brings me back to my grandparents' old house. It was a normal, blue-collar home with a beautiful screened-in porch where birds could be heard, and the soft breeze could be felt. Now, looking back, I remember sitting on the porch with my grandpa, he, with his Wall Street Journal in hand, and his mug of coffee, dripping the freshly brewed cup every so often. To me, this haiku brings back memories of Saturday mornings, enjoying the peace and quiet of dawn as a toddler. To me, this haiku struck a memory in me that had been locked away for a while, and for a little while, I felt at peace. Aiden Etchason, Fall 2022 |
4 sizzling sausages |
5 crumpled notebook paper Page Shields (6) |
6 stovetop popcorn |
7 toddler fingers Page Shields (4) It reminded me of when I was a child. How I used to pick at the flowers and pull them open before they were ready to bloom. The haiku also can have so many meanings. The addition of the word premature works on the toddlers and on the rose buds that are not yet roses. It's also a premature act for the toddlers to open up these buds. This haiku brought me to a field with roses, so that I could even smell them when I read it. For these reasons this haiku is my favourite. Femke Stuut, Fall 2022 |
8 empty nest Page Shields (2) |
9 dust settles in mute Nathaniel Graybeal (3) |
10 alone and cold Femke Stuut |
11 squeals of shock and delight |
12 heart shaped candles |
13 he wore sunflowers Maddy Cummins (4) It reminded me of the movie Midsommar for some reason — like a gender-bent version of the image at the end of the woman in a flower crown. I love the characterization of this “he” as soft and floral. It’s beautiful. Page Shields, Fall 2022 |
14 grass McKenzie Greene (3) |
15 salty morning Page Shields (4) |
16 walking through an antique mall Mikayla Craw (5) This particular haiku resonates with me because it represents a very relatable situation. Furthermore, the descriptive language utilized produces a strong visual and tangible image. While many haiku address a specific image, the added description of smell adds additional dimension. Olivia Swords, Fall 2022 |
17 the silver watch Femke Stuut (3) |
18 crack of pads Aiden Etchason (4) |
19 my sister walks into my room McKenzie Greene (4) |
20 thin crease Olivia Swords (3) |
21 late night screen |
22 art adorns skin Maddy Cummins (3) |
23 rain serenades the Aiden Etchason (3) |
24 a warm breeze Femke Stuut I like this haiku because the summer of 2019 was the summer before I started college here at Millikin. So for me, it reminds me of saying goodbye to friends as they go off for college when it says “five smiles,” being the 5 friends. This is the time in life where you are starting over again. You’re going to a new place where you may not know anyone, and adulthood is starting. Everyone is going there own path and you’re beginning to start a new chapter in life. This is the last time you may see some of your friends. Mikayla Craw, Fall 2022 |
25 my firefly Femke Stuut |
26 drops of sunlight |
27 majestic peaks |
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