Haiku Kukai 03 Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2022
1 rainy night McKenzie Greene This haiku gives me just a calm and peaceful image. I imagine being in the woods in a cabin and being able to fall asleep to the peaceful sound of a tin roof. The last line makes me think that everything in the house is well and accounted for. The family is together, and the immediate world is at a calming peace. Aiden Etchason, Fall 2022 |
2 hiding behind |
3 ssh! Femke Stuut |
4 organ songs Femke Stuut This haiku very specifically reminded me of my grandmother: She was a 1965 Millikin grad, majoring in music ed, and played the organ. Reading this felt like I should have written it myself, it brought such a clear memory to mind. Beautiful. Also great taste in tea! Page Shields, Fall 2022 |
5 peeled potatoes Femke Stuut I loved how nostalgic and warm this haiku felt. I imagined a big family dinner, with cousins running around in the basement, aunt’s gossiping over coffee in the kitchen, and the tv blaring whatever football team happened to be on. It smelled of garlic and warm bread, and you could hear the sizzling of frying pans and clunking of knives. I loved it, it’s nice to be reminded of something you hold so dearly. Maddy Cummins, Fall 2022 |
6 one with the fish McKenzie Greene It reminded me of how much I loved to swim. I would still in the water untill eventually just like this haiku, my mother called me inside for supper. It brings feelings of nostalgia and serenity, picturing a boy happy and content with himself and the fish just swimming. Femke Stuut, Fall 2022 |
7 book club Page Shields |
8 hearts beat in rhythm Page Shields |
9 Chanel no. 5 Mikayla Craw I like this haiku because of its appeal to multiple senses. It also seems to portray a mid-20th century nostalgia reminiscent of Golden Age starlets such as Audrey Hepburn or Grace Kelly. It provides clear imagery while concurrently leaving a degree of the scene left to the reader’s imagination. Olivia Swords, Fall 2022 |
10 a slick path Page Shields |
11 snap of the ball Mikayla Craw |
12 two candles on a cake Mikayla Craw |
13 the press of their hands Olivia Swords |
14 missed call |
15 gracefully landing Maddy Cummins |
16 the space Maddy Cummins I like this haiku because it reminds me of watching a concert and there is a pause, but you’re not quite sure if the piece is over or has more to go. I love how silent the hall gets during that space. It is like everyone is holding their breath. There’s something musical about that silence too. You hear the echo throughout the hall and then it decays. Usually during this time I feel a strong emotion of awe. Mikayla Craw, Fall 2022 |
17 the moon crescendos Olivia Swords |
18 new ground is plowed Aiden Etchason |
19 thick anchor |
20 the Tetons Aiden Etchason |
21 the chime of the bell Aiden Etchason |
22 empty streetlights |
23 the hum of bees Mikayla Craw |
24 lining up |
25 warm breath |
26 grandma’s favorite song Page Shields |
27 moonlight Page Shields |
28 child's breath McKenzie Greene I don’t have a lot of analysis for this one, I just love the innocence it conveys. Beautiful use of figurative language. Page Shields, Fall 2022 |
29 just a hug |
30 no words |
31 a drop Femke Stuut |
32 his handwriting Femke Stuut I’m not sure what sort of relationship this haiku is intended to demonstrate, but I took it as a romantic one—someone reminded of a lost partner through little, day-to-day moments, but not in a way that evokes sadness. Rather, they enjoy looking back on their time together. Page Shields, Fall 2022 |
33 my father Femke Stuut |
34 daylight Femke Stuut |
35 lettered tiles Olivia Swords This was my favorite haiku from Kukai for a couple of reasons. First, scrabble is my favorite board game. I love the aspect of getting to stretch your brain and finding words to make with the letters. I also associate positive memories with Scrabble. Growing up, I always played Scrabble with my dad. Now, I seem to always play it when I go to my grandparent's house. The special moments I get to spend with my family mean the world, and I am happy Scrabble makes those happen. McKenzie Greene, Fall 2022 |
36 the breeze, Maddy Cummins |
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