Haiku Kukai 04 Favorites
Global Haiku • Millikin University • Fall 2022
1 his embrace Maddy Cummins |
2 raindrops paint Maddy Cummins I love the unique word choice in this haiku. The description of raindrops painting a window provides excellent imagery, particularly when combined with the mug’s steam. The third line seems appropriately separate while concurrently connecting with the seemingly cozy, rainy environment described. Olivia Swords, Fall 2022 |
3 my cat and I Femke Stuut I love the feeling that we as readers are being let into this private gossip, this sort of secret language that this person has with their cat. By calling the birds “careless,” we get insight into what they’re talking about, and feel like we’re in the middle of the conversation rather than hearing about it after-the-fact. It really immerses you in the moment. Page Shields, Fall 2022 |
4 half moon |
5 my sisters and I Femke Stuut |
6 hop, hop |
7 flying a kite |
8 running feet Maddy Cummins |
9 leather boots Maddy Cummins |
10 blankets float |
11 the chase continues McKenzie Greene |
12 hammock dangling from branch |
13 one cup of this Aiden Etchason |
14 the creek flows peacefully Aiden Etchason |
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16 there is no crunch |
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18 waiting patiently Aiden Etchason This is one of my favorite haiku from kukai 4 because it takes me back to times when I would fish with my parents, especially my dad. My dad loves to fish, and taught me all the things I know. It was a bonding experience with my dad and also with all three of us. I can remember all the times of reeling in the line and the worm is gone because the fish, or bass, was too quick to hook. Also, my dad teaching me to the fish take it a while to get a good hook, then to jerk it in, surely hooking the fish’s mouth. Mikayla Craw, Fall 2022 |
19 no falling Olivia Swords |
20 both green Olivia Swords |
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22 river path Page Shields This haiku has no mention of the I and therefore is a selfless haiku, which I very much enjoy. It talkes about frogs being able to care for their own. That nature can take care of, and provide for, nature. I like the words chosen for frogs will make their own. I can almost imagine frogs talking to each other and deciding where to go next on their river path. Femke Stuut, Fall 2022 |
23 red-tipped fingers |
24 black water Mikayla Craw |
25 leaves change Mikayla Craw |
26 big sister Mikayla Craw This haiku was so wholesome. It reminded me of my younger sisters, how they mean the absolute world to me, how I tell everyone they’re literal angels from heaven. Something about their strong innocence, their wisdom and beauty, enhanced by this ethereal-like light. I also appreciated the relationship between the moon and the sister. Maddy Cummins, Fall 2022 |
27 Sunday morning Page Shields |
28 the bird perched McKenzie Greene |
29 class and practice Aiden Etchason I really liked this haiku because I used to relate to it so much in high school. I played basketball in high school which is in the winter for my school. So I would walk into school at 8 am and be there until 6:00 pm. Every time I would walk out of practice in those winter months, it was so dark out. It was like my whole day passed me by and it was already over. It almost felt like an endless cycle, and this haiku represents that perfectly. McKenzie Greene, Fall 2022 |
30 chrysanthemums |
31 she takes compliments Maddy Cummins |
32 a white fluffy tail Femke Stuut |
33 Charlotte Femke Stuut |
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