Haiku Kukai 1
Zen & Haiku • Millikin University • March 2017
do you miss the ocean Zack Ploen |
cars Jennifer Rose |
glittering water |
a foggy morning Whitney Edmonson
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tiny cries Alisha Burgett Although I'm not a parent myself, I can sympathize with the nervous excitement new parents endure having their first child. I can only imagine the rush of emotions as all of one's hopes are bundled in a humble cradle. Babies can be both adorable and frustrating at the same time – the haiku is ambiguous as to the nature of the crying. Is the baby hungry, or maybe they're tiny cries of laughter? Leaving the emotional statement open is fitting in this context, which is something I really enjoy in a haiku. Zack I love this haiku, because it just reminds me of how special my children are to me. When I read this, I picture a newborn baby in a special cradle that has been passed down in the family. It reminds me of when we brought our little girls home from the hospital and our first night at home as new parents. I really connected with this haiku for these reasons. Whitney |
dogs in the park Zack Ploen |
the road sings Zack Ploen |
early morning Whitney Edmonson |
dead branches |
her mother's rosary Alisha Burgett
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orange pigeons fly Jane Daniels |
her fingers Jennifer Rose |
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