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Peggy Lyles: Haiku Poet

Global Haiku Tradition
Millikin University, Spring 2001


Katie Hill

Profile of
Peggy Lyles

 

Peggy Lyles: Haiku Poet

Haiku poet, Peggy Lyles was born September 17, 1939. Born in Summerville, South Carolina, she now resides in Tucker, Georgia with her family. Lyles went to Colombia College, where she earned a Bachelor of Arts degree. Receiving the distinguished Woodrow Wilson Fellowship Award allowed her to further her education at Tulane University in New Orleans, Georgia, earning a Masters Degree in English in the early 1960’s. During the next two decades she taught English at Sophie Newcomb College, in North Carolina and the University of Georgia. She then made a significant career move as a result of her interest in haiku and became a poetry editor of the Georgia Journal. Thus began her accomplished haiku career. She is currently, and has been a member of the Haiku Society of America for many years. Specifically, she promotes haiku poetry in the South Carolina and Georgia areas. Her accomplishments include awards such as, Honorable Mention of the Harold G. Henderson Memorial Awards in both 1980 and 1986 and the Museum of Haiku Literature in 1985. The theme of Peggy Lyles haiku poetry include relations to food and southern cooking and lifestyle. She mainly emphasizes the hearing and smelling senses. In the selected haiku that will be analyzed these themes are apparent throughout.

through a cluttered room
the scent
of one fresh rose

The image that is painted in my mind through this particular Peggy Lyles haiku is deeper than that of the ten words used. I do imagine a small, cluttered, city apartment, and I do see the one rose sitting in a vase on the kitchen table. But I am able to see more than that too. Through her simple words, the author establishes the reader in the cluttered room. I am able to see myself walking into the apartment from a long, hard day of work, with obviously a lot on my mind. The haiku creates an image that is easy to relate to for any reader. Most individuals have had the experience of being completely overwhelmed with situations occurring in their life from time to time. Most have also had an experience where a seemingly insignificant person or object played a role in getting past the difficult times occurring. That object enables you to step back from the situation and notice the entire picture, not simply the hard times. That is what I feel that this haiku does for the reader. I think that it is interesting the way in which Lyles arranged her words in this poem. Using the word "through", it leads the reader to believe that the character is looking past something. The author uses the senses in a particular way also. Firstly, she imagines the scent of the flower, and secondly, visually she paints the picture of the rose. Perhaps she does this because she wants the reader to smell something before discovering where it is coming from. I like this poem because of the way it makes me feel. The poem creates images that let the reader actually smell the fresh scent of a single rose, and see the vibrant red colors of its budding pedals. I believe that one knows that a haiku is good and stands out when those images do not have to be described in specific detail. When the poem lets each reader create his or her own image, while still getting the point that the author intended across.

Saturday: the tune
he whistles as he turns
the children’s pancakes

We are now recognizing a common theme among Lyles haiku, that being the appeal to the senses. In this particular haiku she directly appeals to the sense of sound, and indirectly appeals to smell. She talks about the father whistling tunes at the stove as he cooks breakfast. Though not described, the reader can also hear the cracking from the pancake skillet or grill. Besides the obvious image of the sounds the author creates, she also just briefly helps the reader actually smell the aroma of the food. I think that Lyles wants us to not only are able to hear the noises of this Saturday morning and the sounds of the family interaction, but she wants us, as readers to feel the interaction and realize the significance of this moment. Every haiku creates an image that is different for each reader. From this haiku, the image that is created by my mind is a father standing by a stove on a Saturday morning, preparing breakfast for his family as his children watch on from the kitchen table. It is a spring morning and the sun is shining through the windows and reflecting off the kitchen pans and silverware. I envision the children to be playing games at the table. Like his children, the father is also entertaining himself. I thought that it is was interesting the manner in which the author chooses to place the word "turn". When I first read the poem I assumed that Lyles was describing the father turning the pancakes. When I read the haiku a few more times I found that I was not sure whether the author was creating an image that the father was turning the pancakes or turning to look at his children. This poem is one that goes along with Peggy Lyles theme as a writer, being focused on cooking.

summer night
we turn out the lights
to hear the rain

With this Peggy Lyles haiku the reader’s sense of sound is played on more than any other of the senses. With this particular haiku, I imagine a humid summer night, where a couple is comforted with the coolness of the nighttime shower. I picture all the windows open of their home, and the couple sitting in the front room silently. Nothing needs to be said to each other, they are able to enjoy the moment in peace. As a reader, the sensory images come into play along with the visual ones. The reader is able to hear the constant noise of the rainwater hitting the roof and gutters, while also hearing the thunder and lightning crack in the distance. The reader is also able to feel the sweltering heat created by the summertime humidity, as they imagine the couple sweating as they sit in their overheated home. I think that Peggy Lyles wants the reader to feel the comfort of nature. She creates an image that lets the reader imagine the most peaceful evening. Lyles uses words that lead to images of complete darkness. Though some may see this image as not comforting, but in fact rather discomforting. I would challenge this feeling the author makes it clear that the darkness that is created has been self-created. She arranges her words interestingly. Firstly, she lets nature set the summer night set the natural scene of darkness, and then she adds the personal power of the characters turning off the house lights. I really like this haiku. It gives the reader a degree of comfort. I think much of that comfort comes from her choosing to use the pronoun "we", instead of a singular pronoun. A lot of the time comfort is more apparent when you are not alone.

mother-daughter
small talk…
snap beans

Here again in this haiku we are able to see the theme that most relates to Peggy Lyles work. The image that is created by a reader is that of a mother and daughter in their kitchen at home preparing a meal or dish. I imagine the daughter to be a teenager, and the mother to be an at home mom, both of who are caught up in the daily routines that have distanced them from each other. I imagine the conversation to be that of small talk because perhaps there has been some animosity towards each other or they simply have been out of each other’s life that a conversation cannot begin any other way. I can see each at the kitchen table with the silver bowl separating them as they casually throw the broken beans into the bowl. This haiku makes me think a lot about who these characters are and where they have come from. Through her words, my image begins with the assumption that there have been some difficult times between mother-daughter, and there will be more difficult times ahead of them. The connotations of the word "snap" leads me to think that something was revealed that has negative implications. The word "snap" connotes broken, injured, or popped. It does not lead the reader to believe that things are normal within this relationship. I think again as we have seen in a theme of her other haiku; Peggy Lyles wants the reader to realize the importance of these seemingly insignificant moments. The author slowly leads the reader into this conflict between mother and daughter. Firstly, Lyles creates and image of an unconditional relationship, one where both are apparent that love always is there, without question. In her second line, she foreshadows some kind of conflict within the family. And finally in her last line she reinforces that image with the use of the strong word "snap". Her auditory theme is also present in this haiku. The reader is able to hear the uncomfortable small talk between the family members, while also hearing the snapping of the beans and them falling in the bowl. This is seemingly symbolic of their conversation. It is almost like with the surprise of the news, symbolized by the snapped beans, it is they let go, and able to fall into the bowl to be dealt with later.

a breeze
that whispers leaf to lead…
morning glories close

The image that is created by my mind from this haiku is a quite night in spring. There is a peacefulness that the author creates that leads the reader to believe that there is a beginning and an end to things. When I read and reread this haiku the image that is created in my mind is that of a secret or something that is being kept from another. The breeze, lead, and land all symbolize the secret that is being passed. Perhaps the phrase "morning glories close" implies that a new coming is close. Perhaps something different is in the making with the arrival of the new day. I think that the one thing that Peggy Lyles would like the readers to get out of this haiku is that there is a relationship between human nature and actual nature. The arrangement of words of this haiku is key to getting the author’s point across to the readers. If in fact the poem does symbolize gossip or a secret then it would flow just like this haiku does. The breeze is the beginning of the conversation. The leaf would carry the rumor and everywhere it falls it would release what has been said. The arrangement of words is significant because it leads the reader through a logical progression of events. That progression could relate to anything, not just a secret or a rumor. The senses are apparent within this haiku more than any of the others analyzed. Every line appeals to a different sense, bringing to reader to the core of what the purpose of a haiku poem is. The first line, "a breeze" appeals to the feeling. The reader is able to be placed in the middle of the scenery and actually feel the light coolness of the breeze. The second line, "that whispers leaf to lead" appeals to the auditory sense. The ruffle of the leaves is what is heard from the reader’s point of view. Finally, the last line "morning glories close" applies to the visual sense. The brightness and uncertainty of a new day that comes with the morning glories reflects all kinds of different shades of possibilities.

autumn
and my son’s voice deepening
the wind chimes

This haiku follows the pattern of the other haiku that have been analyzed. This particular one is no different in that it has the same theme of appealing to the auditory and visual senses. Through this haiku I develop an image that is seen through a mother’s eyes. The mother is watching her son grow up in front of her. I picture an ordinary day. There is no special significance of the particular day that needs to be established. Obviously the season is fall; the mother is sitting back in no special place and watching her son. The setting is not important in this haiku. On this day, the mother notices the developments in her son, as she had noticed the changing colors of the leaves on the trees earlier when she looked outside the window. Perhaps she is in a daze, and the noise of the wind chime break that daze apart, and refocuses her. Or perhaps there is a relation of the sound of her son’s deepening voice and the gentleness of the wind chimes. As I have felt with the previous haiku, I feel that Peggy Lyles is trying to make a point of significance and life. There is no mention or connotation of a specific day that would lead this mother to look at her son differently than she had the previous day. This leads me to believe that the author wants to reader to realize that there is significance I everyday. It doesn't have to be a birthday or a graduation day, which leads a mother to sit back and look at her son differently. The arrangements of words are different in this haiku than in the other haiku that have been analyzed. There is a pause before "the wind chimes". I believe that there is a reason for this. The mother realizes that things are different, and then there is a break and the day goes on with the pondering. The senses that Lyles uses here are mainly that of hearing.

In conclusion, through these six haiku examples of we are able to see the common themes of her work, which have been established from her background. Coming from the southern background of South Carolina and Georgia, she adapts aspects of that lifestyle into her haiku collection. Senses play an important role in her work. Within each collection of work a reader will find that Lyles draws them in through use of one of the five senses. Her work has more depth than I expected when I chose her for my contemporary author. The thought process of where a poem came from and where it takes you is interesting for any author, but with Lyles I feel more of significance.

—Katie Hill


 

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