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Global Haiku • Millikin University • January 2025

1

old cemetery 
people drive by unaware
his world is six feet under

Abby Heberling

This haiku speaks to me personally because both my grandparents are deceased. I still work on the town they are buried in, whenever i ride pass their graves I make sure to either blow my horn or pray. Those they ride behind or on the side of me look at me sometimes in anger or confusion when i blow my horn unaware that i am not honking at them. Brandon Johnson, January 2025

2

walking in the park
bark-bark
heard at every corner

3

outside of a base
talking about a future
our future

4

spinning down the alley
the ball rolling
please be a strike

5

no parents
what’s for dinner
all grown up

Tionne Spates

This haiku was instantly relatable to me and I bet so many others as well. Meals are a constant quarrel for me everyday especially living on my own for the first time. You tend to take your mother’s cooking or family meal time for granted but once you’re out of the house, you realize how special and, well, easy it was to get a nice meal every night while living at home. It’s now one of my favorite things about coming home and what I may miss the most once I’m back at school this semester. Though, it also prepares me for living on my own for good once I graduate and have a more decent job. Hopefully by then I will be able to plan ahead more, go grocery shopping more frequently, and channel more of my mom’s cooking and homeyness in the long run. Great haiku about nostalgia, memory, and moving forward. Eli Bland, January 2025

I relate to this one heavily as I am out of my parents house and have to take care of my own basic needs. What’s for dinner is absolutely a question you have to ask yourself, and it is definitely a question my partner and I have been asking each other often as we’ve cut back on take out food. In taking on your own house and your own meals you really realize how far into adulthood you are. I live in a house off campus with several roommates and my only source of food is me, so in this I have become completely independent. Lucas Wallen, January 2025

This haiku resonates deeply with me because it captures the bittersweet reality of independence. The absence of parents signifies a transition into adulthood, where the simple question of "what's for dinner" becomes a symbol of self-reliance and responsibility. The phrase "all grown up" encapsulates the mix of pride and nostalgia that comes with growing older and taking on new roles. This haiku beautifully conveys the complexity of growing up in just a few words. It also reminds me of those times when I forgot to eat because no one was there to make food, highlighting the challenges of managing everything on my own. Dalton Hoadley, January 2025

6

summer breeze
a bird on a clothesline
hanging memories 

Abby Heberling

The colors I see in this haiku, are yellow, green, and white. Light sunshine pours through a grassy backyard and a young woman is hanging up laundry as she is visited by a bird. As she hangs the clothes, she pictures the outfits she’s worn and the occasions for which she wore them. She reminisces on the memories that are held within her wardrobe. This haiku is a gentle read that I am fond of. Lance Frederick, January 2025

7

in an empty gym
I discover the sound
of a bouncing ball

Nathaniel Straughter

When I was reading this haiku, I saw myself in the gym when I would go at midnight sometimes and it was completely empty and it's just me and the weights and slam balls. I would put on my headphones, start playing my gym playlist, and start lifting with squats, bulgarian split squats, flys etc. It was just me vs me in the gym and trying to lift more and heavier then my previous lifts and I could hear the weights clinging and being slammed on the ground when doing deadlifts. That everyday that I was in the gym by myself, I wouldn't care about anything else about the lift and trying to get one percent better. Aaron Alonzo Amaya, January 2025

I love this haiku for its ability to evoke a sense of solitude and discovery. The empty gym represents a quiet, almost meditative space where the sound of a bouncing ball becomes a focal point. This haiku highlights the beauty of simple moments and the unexpected joy that can be found in them. It reminds me of playing basketball alone, finding peace and clarity in the rhythmic sound of the ball bouncing, and the way it helped me clear my mind and focus. Dalton Hoadley, January 2025

This haiku is one of my favorite parts of life. Every time I go into the gym it’s like I’m getting my peace back and it’s flipping a switch into a new mind. No one has made their way to the gym at this point so that means I pick the good ball, I use whatever basket I want and as I begin it’s almost like my heartbeat and the ball are at the same pace. I love it. Tionne Spates, January 2025

8

words on a still train
my eyes see art      society sees
a ghetto crime scene

Nathaniel Straughter

I really enjoyed this poem because I was able to imagine a train covered in graffiti. I imagine the sky is a red orange color as the sun begins to set. The haiku offers a beautiful and thought-provoking perspective. To some graffiti is a beautiful art form and to others it is nothing but vandalism which is like any art form it is likely that some will not understand but beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Ashleigh Johnson-Jones, January 2025

I personally wrote this haiku, but I really enjoyed it, and I think it may be my favorite haiku I have written so far. I wrote this on the bus ride back from Carthage, and I was thinking about how people’s perspectives are different. I wanted to try and figure out a way to project this idea and while on the bus we passed a vacant train with graffiti all over it. I thought this was the perfect thing to use as the main subject. Nathaniel Straughter, January 2024

9

tempting to touch 
stuck won't let you out
solid like glass 

10

little minnow 
scares the big fish off
papaw hums a yes

11

wicked winds whisper 
lamp posts sing in silent streets 
winter surrounds

Miamaya Parra

This haiku starts off with a gorgeous string of alliteration. The winds are strong, but they are still delicate enough to carry a secretive breeze. The setting of this haiku is dark, deep, and beautiful. The streets are silent because a winter advisory has been called, and people have retreated to their homes to brace for the surrounding winter storm. This was by far my favorite. Lance Frederick, January 2025

12

on the couch
I lean back
that 70’s show

Andalyn Hodge

This haiku was a funny one to me, I used to watch "that 70s show" and i remember sitting on the couch leaned back eyes glued to the tv, waiting for my next laugh. I can see the person coming home from a long day, dropping down on the couch waiting for dinner to be done. When i first started watching the show i sometimes did not understand the humor in it, but as i got older i realized how so many parts of the show aligned with my life. Brandon Johnson, January 2025

I have been watching sitcoms with my roommates recently (mostly Malcolm in the middle) and it has become a sort of background noise to my house over winter break. My couch is also a second hand couch that we got from a friend/mentor who moved last year. It has a habit of absolutely swallowing you when you sit down, it is super comfortable, but definitely a lean back into sort of couch. This haiku captures that vibe that is emblematic of my winter break this time around. Lucas Wallen, January 2025

This is a relaxing haiku, and this is said by the action taken up by the narrator. They recline back so that they can unwind for the day with a show. Although the author could have been directly referring to “That 70’s Show”, I like to think the last line is referring to any show from the 70’s that you enjoy. For instance, my dad and I would watch “Three’s Company” for a time. It was a pleasant ritual to relax in the living room and enjoy the show. Because of the memories it brings to me, I chose this haiku as one of my favorites. Lance Frederick, January 2025

13

countryside shed
burned to smithereens
surplus of firewood

14

sweaty palms
he flashes    an uncomfortable
smile

Ashleigh Johnson-Jones

I really enjoy this haiku because of the use of emotion, and it quickly puts the reader into the shoes of the writer. Everyone can connect to that nervousness at some point. It brings me back to the first time I picked a date up from their house. Palms sweaty hoping that her parents don’t open the door because I am afraid to confront them. Nathaniel Straughter, January 2024

Reading this haiku I was taken into the point of view of a guy in a random group setting, this guy often keeps to himself with not many friends and he likes it that way. One day he is put in this group setting and for some reason all eyes are on him and he’s attracting a lot of attention, this brings the uncomfortable fake smile to make it seem ok and the sweating hands of anticipation. Tionne Spates, January 2025

15

I do . . .
I don’t
what do I want?

Ashleigh Johnson-Jones

I really like this haiku because it talks about indecisiveness. Sometimes in life, we as humans have to make difficult decisions. Thoughts of other people, how the outcome will be, and if this is truly the right choice are all things that make decision making difficult. This haiku shows that it is okay to not know what to do and to take time to be sure that we are confident with our choices. Abby Heberling, January 2025

16

sheets of muddy ice
over uneven sidewalks
low-income housing

Lucas Wallen

This haiku hit home for me because I grew up in low-income housing as a child. I remember coming outside and the snow would be muddy and i how uneven our sideways would be. i never understood why, but as a child you're just happy to play outside with your friends. As i got older i understood that a lot of us were just another number to the system we grew up in. Brandon Johnson, January 2025

17

laugh lines
red hands
covered in snow

Lucas Wallen

18

empty stable
he really was
so hungry

Lance Frederick

I like the use of senryu in this haiku. Really what I think makes me like it so much it's just how easily it recognizable it is. Like I read the Haiku and I understood it right away I also like that it really leans into that silly goofiness of the original saying. Andalyn Hodge, January 2025

19

empty playground—
a crow’s shadow down
the tallest slide

20

happy life 
minus the wife
guess they were wrong

Brandon Johnson

I found this haiku to be very entertaining. Everyone is familiar with the saying “happy wife happy life” but the narrator does not need a wife to be happy. By eliminating the wife from the equation, you automatically have a happy life. I found this haiku to be a very funny play on a popular saying. Ashleigh Johnson-Jones, January 2025

This poem offers an alternative viewpoint where contentment can be obtained on one's own, challenging the widely held notion that marriage is a requirement for pleasure. It has a broad appeal that speaks to anyone who has challenged social conventions or made unorthodox life decisions. Although it appears to be humorous, it quietly honors uniqueness and autonomy. Brittney Spalding, January 2025

This haiku really captures how it feels to not fit in with society’s standards. It is common for people to find a spouse and make a family but that is not always the perfect life for everyone. When I read this haiku, I picture a guy in his 20s. He went to college, got his dream job, and lives by himself. He is happy as can be. It may be hard for people to really understand why he is so happy because he does not even have a girlfriend let alone a wife. However, it does not bother him. I think this shows how you can be happy doing what you want to do and not be influenced by something. Abby Heberling, January 2025

It should come as no surprise to learn that I am queer, I am also in a committed relationship with a man. Throughout a lot of my life I was held to incredibly heterosexual standards and told that I should strive to force myself to fit them. My journey is a bit complicated on that end, but most queer people can relate to this sentiment of being happy despite defining conventional standards. I also identify as grey a-romantic, which means that I do not experience romantic attraction often and I have always been pretty open about that. This had led to me experiencing a lot of allo-normative rhetoric around my sexuality and relationships. Lucas Wallen, January 2025

21

middle of the night
cars on the road
going nowhere fast

Brandon Johnson

I really like the feeling of this one. the emotion within this piece makes me feel nostalgia.  I'm thinking of dark muted purples and blues for the night sky, But I'm also thinking of the brightness of the headlights of the vehicle, the pitter patter of mosquitoes exploding on the windshield, stuff like that. Andalyn Hodge, January 2025

 

22

suitcase over weight
ready to go away
for 3 days

Kendra Marnul

23

winter dusk
my breath rises
to meet the stars

Brittney Spalding

24

skipping rocks
my brother and I play
at the pond

Kendra Marnul

25

quiet house
the fireplace glistens
while it snows outside

Jazmine Mileham

26

mom watches
the children playing
in snow

27

snow crunch
I listen to the call
of a crow

28

bustling terminals
now boarding zone 7
my time has come

Jake Reed

This haiku reminds me of when people are running late and running through the airport. I’ve personally never experienced this because my family would make us get to the airport 3 hours early. I can hear people yelling and the suitcases scrapping against the ground. Kendra Marnul, January 2025

29

the air bus waits for no one
the man next to me
waits for his coffee

30

icicles
drip
drop
onto
my
head
as
I
walk

Ashleigh Johnson-Jones

I loved the formatting of this haiku and the imagery it gave me in turn with also how descriptive it is. Obviously the format and spacing is supposed to mimic an actual icicle, giving it that much more character and detail. Overall, it’s a great and fun poem and something everyone can relate to this time of year. Icicles also always make me think of that memorable line in A Christmas Story near the end when Ralphie says he’d gotten hit by an icicle instead of the truth being that he shot himself with his new BB gun on accident and his mother goes, “Those icicles have been known to kill people!!” Such a classic. Eli Bland, January 2025

31

tik-tok, tik-tok
in the quiet room of books
the hands don’t stop

Cristina Borunda

32

at the stoplight
the taxi driver swipes
left or right

33

opening up
the door
to my self

34

at my therapist
the light flickers
frustration

35

over and over
but never quite exact
kicking the hacky sack

Eli Bland

36

we rush up
the cold metal steps
finally, inside

37

at a farm sale
grandpa biding
for the car

38

coffee shop
table for two
one mug on the table

Abby Heberling

This haiku paints a picture of a person going out by themselves. Maybe they are happy to be alone or maybe they feel lonely and long for a coffee companion. The situation of the character’s loneliness is up to the readers’ discretion, and I enjoy that. Ashleigh Johnson-Jones, January 2025

Readers are encouraged to conjure up the tale of the lone mug in this haiku. Was the partner absent, late, or never present at all? The poem emphasizes how commonplace environments, such as coffee shops, can mirror more profound feelings and experiences. It captures a universal feeling of solitude and longing, making it both relatable and quietly profound. Brittney Spalding, January 2025

39

sun in the sky
snow on the ground
hypocritical

40

she turns her head
i’m met with glaring eyes
dishes in the skink

41

wipe my shoes
the court squeaks
a peace of mind

Tionne Spates

I can directly connect with this haiku as I am part of the Men’s Basketball team here at Millikin. The sound of shoes squeaking on the court can be annoying for most people, but it reminds me of a space where nothing else matters but basketball. As the last line says “a peace of mind” the court really is that peace for me. Whenever I’ve had a rough day or just a lot on my mind, the gym is somewhere I can go and forget, even if it’s just for a few minutes. Nathaniel Straughter, January 2024

42

pizza in hand
off to the dorm
friends laughing home

Tionne Spates

I like this haiku because this is the definition of college socially. Especially freshman year. You always see groups of people walking back to their dorm with pizza boxes in their hand walking and laughing. Pizza is also a stable food in college you can see. Kendra Marnul, January 2025

43

the smell of green
wind whistles
through the trees

Kendra Marnul

44

new garden
air smells like mulch
yard full of colors

45

wiping dirty boots
still dragging salt inside,
home is colder

46

pile of debt looms 
hard as cement 
walk the stage with a smile 

Miamaya Parra

This haiku stands out to me because it captures the juxtaposition of financial burden and personal achievement. The "pile of debt" is described as "hard as cement," emphasizing its weight and permanence. Yet, despite this looming challenge, the individual "walks the stage with a smile," symbolizing resilience and the triumph of spirit. This haiku speaks to the strength it takes to celebrate accomplishments even when faced with significant obstacles, making it both poignant and inspiring. It perfectly encapsulates the feeling of graduating college, knowing the debt that awaits but still feeling proud and accomplished. Dalton Hoadley, January 2025

47

white lace lays  
petals show you the way 
alone down the aisle

48

looking back
looking forward
never a dull moment

Eli Bland

49

walking the dog
wind from the lake
I want to go home

50

car horns
faded crosswalks
with no stop signs

Lucas Wallen

51

knee pain
used books
in little libraries

52

crickets serenade,
stars reflected in still lakes—
night breathes in and out

 

53

train whistle
the way my thoughts
echo home

Brittney Spalding

This one also makes me feel nostalgic but in a different way the number 21. If I'm honest this Haiku reminds me a lot of The Polar Express. That very last scene when the train is slowly chugging off into the distance And you can see a little bit  of his childish wonder has returned . That is the kind of feeling I get from this haiku. The feeling of coming home, And being a changed person. Andalyn Hodge, January 2025

54

winter walk
in the cold
misery loves company

Andalyn Hodge

55

snow crunches
under cold feet
wet socks

Ashleigh Johnson-Jones

56

roaring engine
father's wisdom
louder

Aaron Alonzo Amaya

When I read this haiku, I see my father asking for my help, when I was younger,  to change the oil under my moms and his car. I remember when I was down there with my dad teaching me how to change the oil, he would talk to me about certain mistakes he made when he was a younger man.  That one thing that really spoke to me was to not fully trust anyone at the beginning. That and many other lessons he has taught me over the years and that stick with me now and later on. Aaron Alonzo Amaya, January 2025

This is one that reminds me of me when something goes wrong with my car. I am not auto savvy. I usually called my dad because he knows. When I read this, is think of my car engine starting and can hear it. Kendra Marnul, January 2025

57

Time capsule opened excitedly
two years early
weak willpower

58

snowflakes fall
I yearn
for blooming flowers

Emma Cox

59

a dusty bedroom
stories from a distant past
the walls tell

Nathaniel Straughter

The idea that locations carry the echoes of their pasts is captured in this haiku. Readers are prompted to reflect on the lives and events that have impacted the spaces around them as the dusty bedroom evolves from a mere physical space to a symbol of memory and time. It encapsulates the subdued poetry of abandoned locations and their capacity to evoke creativity and human connection. Brittney Spalding, January 2025

60

a new year
feelings of hope arise
how long will they stay

Nathaniel Straughter

I feel like this haiku would be very relatable for people. At the end of every year, it seems like there is some sort of pressure to want to become the best version of yourself in the next year. New Year’s resolutions are made. Bad habits are supposed to be left in the past year. There is always some sort of hope at the beginning of each year. This haiku really captures the feeling of wanting to change, but how realistic the resolutions can actually be and will a change actually happen.
Abby Heberling, January 2025


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