Rengay Attempts 1
PACE Global Haiku Rengay • Millikin University • January 2009
Encounter the subway routine hoping to gain attention the argument clouds form above a girl passes me loneliness.... by Kim Day & Alike Norman |
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My favorite Rengay for this kukai 3 is The Photo. I like how it begins and ends with the same type of haiku and therefore bringing it back around to the beginning of the Rengay. I can picture this photo and all of the people of her family; how some are doing well and others not. My favorite line is, “a phone call from the darkness/ they are getting a divorce.” You can literally hear the call, at night, in the silence, and feel the sadness and strong emotion of the news, almost as if it was your own family. That is why I really like this Rengay. Christin |
The Photo photograph propped on fireplace how comfortable all four fit walking through the corridors in the sunlight a phone call from the darknes photgraph propped on the dresser by Alike Norman & ? |
The Neighborhood through the missing slats trash talkin' rhythmic thumping their laughter rippling music in sidewalk puddles a familiar tune by Eris Eridanus & Jacque Manicki |
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Sunday Afternoon warm summer breeze lost in thought picking up the pace storm clouds lightning crashes soaking wet… by Jacque & Jackie Manicki (my mother-in-law) |
Primrose and Clover the battle horn sings women throw primrose vultures circle ahead thunder approaches in the distance the battle rages red crimson flows by Seth Eridanus and Eris Eridanus Seth just turned fifteen. He has been learning and writing haiku as I have been. We used a haiku that he had previously written as our hokku. |
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Empty Eyes hectic day unfamiliar sound empty eyes musky smell deep red early dawn by Rachel & Amanda |
The Cycle lipstick and heels prowling pray white lies sweaty palms tied and gagged bra and lipstick by Rachel & Amanda |
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Sweet Blessings cold sticky goo diapers, onesies, and bottles beginning growing bigger humid days frantic last minute ray of sunshine by Courtney Kerley & Buffy Smith |
Forest Fantasy the family finds the cool blade echoes with the flurries a cardinal proudly perches pale moonlight filling the crisp air by Lauri Torbert, Mark Isaacs, Courtney Kerley |
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Wedding Day Autumn day beyond the stairway she’s heading this way eyes lock life changing rose pedals by Justin Pratt & ? |
June Meteor Rain summer day crashing waves knee high in water sandwiches soggy chocolate cake flash in the sky by Justin Pratt & ? |
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I loved this renga because I was able to connect with it on such a personal level. I connected with the first three lines because, like the writer, I needed just one more class to satisfy my graduation requirement. The second three lines resonate with me due to my course load this semester and that I’ve been taking two classes per week, needless to say I’ve been going to bed very late the last five weeks. The effect of these late bed times makes class time creep by, as the writer states. Break times are the times we get to socialize and stop focusing on class and represent an oasis’ in the class schedule that we wait for. The final lines summarize the experience in both our longing and our frustration as it is the soda machine which contains the caffeine we desire yet sometimes refuses to accept our dollar bills. Carson |
6-10pm global haiku— wrong class room four hours left… the clock ticks break time i hope the machine… by Stephen Lones & Katie McIntosh |
House Bunny lost in this world too old… Bodaciously Going they wanted a role model Brains. Beauty. Bravery. rags to riches by Katie McIntosh |
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Passion Over and over my mind replays As I lay Morning glory On the beach Watching the tides Together forever by Kimilee Day & Tobais Jarrett |
In the beginning…. Darkness Smiling Water Dry ground Fruit trees The sun The lesser light Living creatures Animals Dust in hands Breathing Resting by Melissa Davidson & April |
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Winter Games Winter pond – Skates and sticks Ice swept clean Break time… Assembly line Winter wonderland by Nicky & Jeremy Wallace |
Harmony Floating butterflies Daisies sway in rhythm Nature's Music... Waterbug twirling Young buck prances long shadows caress by Nicky Wallace and Sue James |
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SOUTHERN STYLE spring break— just the two of us circling the riverwalk candles and tablecloths time stands still our last day by Curt Swigert and Mary Sue Swigert |
NAIL BITER the band plays catch the pass foreheads perspire pacing on the sideline rows of bleachers the team rallies |
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The Mother-in-Law Six months… New possibilities New year A change is coming …. New Job Another glass of wine by Tamara & ? |
Family Pets First day home Tricks to learn Introductions Obedience New bed Constant companion by Tamara & ? |
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Reunion In the sold out arena As the smoke rises From the stage Cameras flash Memories of the past A band reunited by Julie Trimble & family? |
Igor’s Plot dark lab evil invention hunched assistant sparks fly terror plot— experiment fails by J. Mark Isaacs &Coral Isaacs |
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Forrest Fantasy the family finds the cool blade echoes with the flurries a cardinal proudly perches pale moonlight filling the crisp air by Courtney Kerley, Lauri Torbert & J. Mark Isaacs |
An Assignment the finger points at pencil in hand eraser dust smudges searching left, up, down I don’t have no by Sue James and Elizabeth James |
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We’ll Never Do This Again Moving furniture The temperature Moving Frozen hands Hundreds of books We’ll never do this again by Mary and Christin Birmingham |
Papa In the frozen foods The scent brings back memories A grandfather, I look for the source of the smell Shivering Finally closing the door, I remember by Christin Birmingham & ? |
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Bibliography western or romance a reader’s smorgasbord whispers between aisles knight takes bishop newspaper on a stick magazines entombed in plastic by Ed and Lauri Torbert |
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