EN340
/ IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Spring 2003 |
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Windy
Spring Day
Favorite
Haiku
by
Paul
Scherschel
In
order to read a haiku, the reader needs to embrace the haiku
and the event being expressed. So, reader, I hope you are
ready to sit back and enjoy these haiku. Some haiku are
meant to be funny, while others may simply connect people
with nature. Haiku can be an opportunity to feel a connection
with one's self, other people, and the world around us.
Life can be funny, sad, or may simply just be. Haiku can
capture each of these moments. The haiku in this booklet
include all of those elements. I enjoy trying to grasp the
essence of a moment, but want you, the reader, to make it
your own. Haiku is a "wordless" poem that has
allowed me to express myself, while hopefully allowing the
readers to fill in the lines. Also, the element of nature
is a means to go beyond the words of a haiku to use more
of our senses. The haiku contained within this booklet are
my favorites. Haiku are short, so readers should read the
entire haiku. There is no need to skim through a haiku,
so sit back, relax, and focus your mind. Read the entire
haiku, and then paint a picture.
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Reader's
Introduction
Paul's
haiku is trying persistently and patiently, like a gentle
and steady breeze, to take us back to the moment just
before our excitement is revealed and the surprise is
no longer a surprise. After reading "unopened newspaper"
and watching the "uneaten lasagna" go cold on
the stove, Paul's readers are consumed with feelings of
foreplay. In these poems, Paul forces the reader to appreciate
the silence just before the music begins and the climactic
rush that leads to sudden silence after the performance.
Paul often leaves his reader just where they should be-in
longing. Yet, Paul gives the reader satisfaction eventually.
In
"endless sky" the foreplay is finally ended
for the reader or, rather, he allows for a temporary anecdote
to the foreplay to keep the reader reading only to set
up more foreplay later. For me, "endless sky"
and "summer drive" are the perfect channels
for this action. I am left wanting to turn my ball cap
backwards and "toss the football" with Paul.
The car doesn't even matter. Nevertheless, I still want
that moment just before I catch the scent of the flower
. . . when I do or do not know that the scent will finally
arrive at my nose. I must end this paragraph of the introduction,
fittingly, with a question. How lovely is that moment?
Paul's
comedic repertoire is on display as he pokes fun at "the
professor." He also gives readers a fairly universal
picture of life through these subjective moments with
the wide variety of feelings the reader feels in his haiku.
Paul's readers complete a journey through awkward moments
in poems like "she has to pay" and they also
traverse hardships in poems like "moonlight"
Paul
has caught hold of the ungrasp-able art form of haiku
by allowing the words to flow from his pen when they are
ready to come. Thus, there is just enough detail compacted
in his poetry for a hazy picture. He has reminded us of
a moment we want to grasp hold of but just cannot. Thus,
Paul has left at least this reader longing and wanting
for something beautiful. Paul has left this reader thinking
of the last words of Keat's poem, "Ode on a Grecian
Urn:"
"Beauty
is truth and truth is beauty.
That is all ye need to know on Earth,
and that is all ye need to know."
Joe
Kramp
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unopened
newspaper
grandpa's recliner
sits motionless
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local
bar
away from everything
we sing karaoke
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in
the country
the van overheats
football
toss
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professor
stands confident
with blissful ignorance
pants unzipped
best
college senryu award
Spring 2003
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wheelchairs
in a line
we all smile
at the blooming trees
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grandpa's
rusty tractor
neighbors gather
to collect hay bails
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dad
sits back
in his canoe
we race past him
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wet
summer morning
poop splatters
in the milk barn
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windy
spring day
somersault
of the soda can
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©2003
Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights
reserved for original authors
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