EN340
/ IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Spring 2003 |
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Sinking
into
the Three Lined Path
Haiku
by
Tricia
J. Scholl
As
a writer I have always found it hard to express my feeling
on the spur of the moment. Usually, words would flow from
my fingertips only if I had strong feeling, and the poems
in my head would come at the most awkward moments. I would
have to recite them over and over in my head hoping I wouldn't
forget. When I did write them down I would second-guess my
creativity, and sometimes, I would throw the poem away.
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Haiku
has helped me learn to express myself in a whole other wayHaiku
is about expressing a moment, any moment that one may be feeling
at that time, or did feel at a time. But the majority of the
time the haiku takes place in present tense. Now when I write
haiku I feel so much more comfortable with the moment. I believe
I can write for myself a lot easier now and express my feelings
in a new light. I have a new respect for the writing of haiku.
There are so many ways to express different feelings in a
haiku without having to write a thousand words. Three lines,
two lines, or even one lines satisfies the cravings of the
soul.
I
chose these because I believe they give the reader a good
outlook into all the different kinds of experiences I have
had. I chose my favorite rengay which is about a day I had
sitting on the couch and realizing a new door was opening
for me after I graduate, and I how I have to be full of
courage to walk through. I also chose my 2 favorite nature
pieces, and 4 of my favorite childhood/family memory haiku.
I wrote a series of 10-15 haiku while I was in the middle
of a relationship; I chose 2 from the series that were my
favorite. I also added about 4 senryu, these were either
about experiences I have had or about experiences others
have had; one in particular isn't actually about anything
significant at all, purely there for the reader to use their
imagination. Finally, 2 are about music, one of my greatest
passions. Enjoy what you read free your mind. And go.
Tricia
J. Scholl
Reader's
Introduction
Reading
Tricia's haiku allows the reader a glimpse into her heart,
mind and soul, and into what motivates and inspires her.
She writes from the heart about memories and feelings that
are real to her, as well as ordinary every day. This approach
to writing allows the readers to place him or her into that
situation and lose themselves for that split second into
a memory. Her writing has meaning and is an honest reflection
of all that is important and meaningful to her. One can
visualize her journey from heartbreak to joy and still sense
her strength and determination to overcome such obstacles
and memories. Her haiku is therefore easy for the reader
to relate to, which makes her work that much more enjoyable
and interesting.
Chrissy
Hulse
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clear
water reaches . . .
far
past the horizon
the
sun melts my back
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mother's
small hands
twirl my hair
my head in her lap
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his
black eyes
burn me
a kiss
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a
cool summer day
the whispering willow
tells secrets to the wind
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shadows
falling down
on the beach sand
we're wearing nothing
from
Dave Matthews
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moonlight
falling down
sleeping underneath your
skin . . .
winter sky
from
Counting Crows
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©2003
Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights
reserved for original authors
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