PACE Global Haiku • Spring 2008
Dr. Randy Brooks

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AmandaAukerman
Amanda Aukerman

I am a freshman and a double major in BA Applied Mathematics and Music with my concentration being percussion. I am from Bloomington Normal, Illinois, where I live with my sister, mother and father. I enjoy all of nature's seasons whether I am inside or outside, playing percussion and piano, and reading.

Mother Nature

by
Amanda Aukerman

I choose to write my collection on the different seasons that occur each and every year. I like to write from personal experiences that either I have had or a friend or family member has had because I feel as though it makes the haiku easier to relate to. My collection consists of haiku that take the reader on a trip from fall to winter to spring and lastly to summer.

Reader's Introduction:

It is easy to see that the author's haiku are influenced by love and the simple pleasures of nature. She writes in a straightforward style that can easily be understood by readers, yet she also leaves enough room for the readers to interpret the haiku in different ways according to their own experiences.  My favorite haiku of hers was the following:

first day of summer
the little girls
dust off the jump rope

I really love the imagery that this haiku provides. The choice of words in the last line "dust off the jump rope is very descriptive. I can picture a jump rope that has been sitting in a dark garage all year, and now the little girls are taking it out into the sunlight for its first use in months. --Jessica Villarreal


the first date
he brings her
a bunch of daises

 


school night
the couple kisses
front porch lights flicker


rain strikes the window
her fingers bring out
the sweet piano melody

 


the rose dies
but the letter remains
true love


cold afternoon
chapped hands cradle
a cup of tea

 


he tosses
the snowball
at his secret crush


the snowman
grows through
the blizzard

 


first day of summer
the little girls
dust off the jump rope


the evening breeze
washes over me
as the sun sets

 


© 2008, Randy Brooks • Millikin University
All rights returned to authors upon publication.