EN340 / IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Spring 2002
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Brianne Marsel


The Haiku Song

Profile on Bernard Einbond's Haiku

Selected Haiku

by
Brianne Marsel

I feel that my haiku reflect a lot on the ideals and subjects that I value, such as family and friends. I have a very close family, and many of the memories that I base my haiku on are related to family gatherings, my childhood, or weekends at my Grandparents’ house. Also, my Grandmother passed away in December of 2001, and that led to many memories and experiences that might not have been exposed to at this time had this not occurred at this time. I had a very happy childhood, and grew up in a small town, so several of my haiku represent those simpler times, and it was a wonderful escape to go back and live through them again through my haiku, especially with all the stress of college.

I also feel that simplicity is beautiful, and everything in God’s world has it’s own aspect of perfection and wonder. Nature doesn’t have to be something astronomical to be a work of art, even the simplest blade of grass is a wonder, and I tried to capture some of that beauty within my haiku writing throughout the semester.

I value my friends so much, and they definitely help keep me sane. My friends have helped me to see the irony and humor in life, as well as love, and therefore, many of my haiku and senryu are a twist on the typical world of fairy tale, even though I am very much a believer in “Once Upon a time”. Sometimes things don’t always happen as we plan them, and that can make for some very interesting times!

Finally, over the past year I have been so blessed to experience a love like I have never known, from a man who has helped me grow so much since I have known him. My experiences in relationships was very limited (i.e. non-existent) before I met him, and as our relationship has gone forward into an engagement last December, my haiku this semester finally have a wonderful (although not always perfect) reality to base the idea of romantic love upon; unlike when I wrote poetry or songs before, and had to imagine everything based upon other’s experiences.


Valentine's dance
I only go
for the cupcakes

(Illinois Times, Feb. 21, 2002)


corner booth
old friends
sharing cold fries


lilac euphoria
green fingers tickle
our newly bare feet

 

 

gold band doesn’t fit
like it used to
faded roses on the mantle


make-up removed
now he tells me
that I’m beautiful

 

 

His back room is a sanctuary of old couches with cushions re-covered where the stuffing poked through and pictures of dogs playing poker. His 19-inch window to the world is broadcasting makeovers on Maury louder than any outside noise, as he sits with a warm Bud Light by his side from a day’s worth of sipping. In and out of sleep, his head nods to his chest covered by a threadbare polo shirt made useful when wintering in Florida, but Midwest chill leads to an electric bill influenced by 80 degree heating and his gnarled appendages are frozen in a “cigar holding” position, the outcome of a habit given up three years ago. My Grandfather is ready to move on to the next world. Everything that impacts him here has happened already, and he pats the arm of the couch next to him, empty almost four months from the hand that wore the gold band now on his left pinky finger.

                    lifetime of stories
                    a man living
                    in yesterday


fingers and lips
tattooed in blue
memories of mulberries

 

 

memories of grandma
carefully in boxes
clothes to give away


tarnished world
made new again
     first
          snow
     fall

 

 

Untitled (the haiku song)

sunlight
through new leaves
patterns on the water

     God in the details
     a butterfly
     perfectly painted wings

laying back in tall grass
building cloud castles
I become a child again

     open field
     picking the wildflower
     from behind my ear

skipping stones
your hand smooth
on the small of my back

     tree swing in the back yard
     toes stretching higher
     touching God

sand on my feet
my footprints
already washed away

(see the tabs)

 


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