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Tanka Writing Roundtable • Millikin University • Spring 2024
1 retire early or rise late Sophie a twelve hour night staring at the ceiling retire early |
2 up and down xxxxx a bicycle up |
3 in the end xxxxx confetti & party hats in the end
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4 chittering ducks Leah soft quacks echo chittering ducks |
5 War in the east xxxxx |
6 the old xxxxx walking across the old friend |
7 a friend’s mom’s goddaughter xxxxx a goddaughter
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8 everything kind and good xxxxx all things kind and good the earth |
9 moving to a new city Randy grown-up moving moving to a new city
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