Advanced Studies in Poetry: Global Haiku Tradition
EN 340/IN350 Spring 2002
Dr. Randy Brooks
Millikin University
MAC 014a: MWF 8-10 & 2-3
rbrooks@mail.millikin.edu

Classroom: Staley Library 18
MWF 10:00 –10:50

Students in Global Haiku Tradition

Student Haiku to Edit
One || Two || Matching Contest || Senryu Contest || Three ||

Rengay & Tan-renga to Edit
One || Two || Three || Kasen Renga


Kukai Favorites

Final Kukai

Favorites 1 || Favorites 2 || Lent (English & French)

Snow || Valentine's Day' || Spring Break || Rengay || Haibun || Television Senryu

Matching Haiku Contest Results || Matching Senryu Contest Results

Matching Contests (Judge by Reading Groups)

Fruit || Hands || Empty || Yellow Jacket || Water || Storm


Reading & Writing Assignments by Dates:

1/16

reading: Almost Unseen, introductions, prose

writing: select 3 favorite haiku and briefly write your imagined, felt response to them. be ready to discuss why you like them

1/18

reading: another 25-30 pages of Swede’s book

writing: find three more favorite Swede haiku—write your short imagined felt responses to them (one paragraph each), then go into more depth describing a memory from your own life (one page) THEN write a haiku which captures a moment from within that memory.

1/21

reading: The Haiku Handbook, Chapters 1-3 and finish reading Swede’s collection

writing: find a favorite Japanese & Swede haiku—write your short imagination responses to them (one paragraph each), then note differences in the Japanese and Swede’s work

writing haiku: try 5-10 haiku based on memories rising up in your mind from reading George Swede’s haiku (due for exchange Wednesday and for workshop on Friday). (five to ten haiku attempts due for our first workshop day—copies for group, email Brooks as an RTF attachment)

1/23

reading: exchanged haiku from group

writing: (select your favorite from each person and write a short imagined response to it) & write an imagined memory from associations from 1 haiku written by a classmate concluding with a new original haiku by you (or variation of their original haiku by you) email your responses to Dr. Brooks

1/25

reading & writing: Re-read the chapters 2-3 on Japanese haiku in the Haiku Handbook and write ¶ on imagined responses to 2 favorites (1 from older times & 1 from modern)

writing: revise your haiku for Monday and send your 3-4 best haiku to Dr. Brooks by email (we will be doing a class kukai of favorites next Wed!)

1/28

reading for Friday: Haiku Handbook,, chapters 7 & season word lists
response writing for Friday: find 2 favorites among Swede’s nature haiku & write ¶ on one
Kukai reading & response writing from workshop 1 for Wednesday: select your favorites (4-8 haiku from class) and write ¶ response to THE top favorite

1/30

reading for Friday: Haiku Handbook, chapters 7 & season word lists
response writing for Friday: find 2 favorites among Swede’s nature haiku & write ¶ on one
group statement: characteristics of best, most effective haiku
     "things found" in the best, most effective haiku. Characteristics the students in that group like, with a        couple of haiku for examples.

2/1

reading: haiku by Lee Gurga in Global Haiku Anthology & The Haiku Anthology
response writing: 3 favorites by Gurga & 1 favorite reader’s response paragraph
writing haiku: 3-5 "winter wind" or "freezing rain" or "new snow" haiku for Monday (deliberately include nature or an image that places us in a seasonal context)
writing haiku: 2-3 "memory trigger" haiku about an object or thing or particular place that has a lot of emotional investment or memories clinging to it

Ginko—a haiku walk by a group of haiku writers in which everyone just enjoys the walk together, stopping to notice things and to write haiku from shared experience.
extra credit group work: Ginko walk haiku (at least 3 haiku per person on the walk)

2/4

bring your exchange haiku Wednesday—we share responses & edit variation ideas in groups in the class (seek ways to enrich context of place & time & season)

reading for Friday 2/8:
Love Haiku by Masajo Suzuki
response writing for Friday 2/8: 3 favorites from Massjo’s Love Haiku and an extended memory response to one ending with your own original haiku

writing for Friday 2/8: 2-3 attempts using imagination from different perspectives and 3 from direct experience or memories (especially related to theme of love and valentine’s day)

2/6

exchange your haiku for workshop editing in groups. (seek ways to enrich context of place & time & season)

reading: Love Haiku by Masajo Suzuki (we will continue reading Suzuki through 2/13)

response writing: 3 favorites from Masajo’s Love Haiku and an extended memory response to one ending with your own original haiku

writing for Friday: 3-5 from memories or direct experience (especially related to theme of love and valentine’s day)

2/7 SPECIAL WORKSHOP EVENT!

Lee Gurga, Associate Editor of Modern Haiku & former President of HAS will be at Millikin University for a haiku workshop, reading and Valentine’s day kukai.

Workshop from 3:30-5:00 pm—Shilling 322
Reading from 7-8pm—Kirkland 128 (bring 2 friends for an extra credit point)

2/8

response writing due Monday after the workshop: 1 favorite (why paragraph) from each person in your group AND 1 variation edit or edit suggestions that would make 1 from each member in your group better than it currently is. (use the haiku attempts exchanged on Wednesday, Feb. 6)

any revisions of your love & Valentine's day haiku are due SUNDAY night.

2/11

writing for Wednesday: revised haiku are due by Tuesday, 2/12 for the Second Kukai on Wednesday 2/13

2/13

Valentine's Day kukai: Each group selects a top 2 Valentine's day haiku (only 2) and bring a treat for the winners on Friday.

Valentine's Day Kukai selections (births to be celebrated) will be announced on Wednesday (Gurga's selections announced Friday). We will have 3 selectors besides the groups—Chelsey Peters, Lee Gurga and Dr. Brooks

2/15

response writing from Kukai selections 2: 5-6 favorites and a response paragraph to one best favorite
(extra credit to do extended memory in response to absolute favorite ending with your own haiku)

for 2/18

reading: Love Haiku by Masajo Suzuki and the preface & Chapter 1 of Matsuo Bashô by Ueda

response writing: 1 more favorite from Masajo’s Love Haiku and 1 that you don't like (explain why).

extra credit: a haiku on Ash Wednesday or lent

for 2/20

reading: Chapter 2 of Matsuo Bashô by Ueda

response writing: 3 favorites by Bashô with paragraph responses why for each
( do extended memory paragraph in response to one of your favorites ending with your own haiku)

French students assignment: read and possibly improve the translations of the Lent Kukai (machine translations) Lent || and write a paragraph of your imagined response to 2 favorites

(Valentine's kukai have also been translated by machine translation and could use improvemetns)

for 2/22

reading: Haiku Handbook, chapters 4, 5 & 8 (on form) and chapter 9 (craft)

group writing: definitions of genre, lyric, sonnet, narrative, epic, ballad, poetic form

haiku writing: take an existing haiku you’ve done and create 2-3 variations experimenting with the use of space and alternative ways of conveying its form on the page

French students haiku writing assignment: 3-5 original haiku with versions in English & French

for 2/25

reading: The Haiku Anthology, intro-through page 88 (Amann through Hotham)

response & haiku writing: three favorites with short response paragraphs to 2 & 1 extended memory response followed by 2-3 original haiku in response to your favorites (experiment with the form)

critical analysis of form: compare three haiku from THA on your issue related to form

for 2/27

reading: The Haiku Anthology, 89-188

response & haiku writing: three favorites with short response paragraphs to 2 & 1 extended memory response followed by an original haiku in response to your favorite

haiku writing: 5 snow haiku for our next kukai (exchange copies in groups Wednesday) for Friday edit and response exchanges

for 3/1

reading: The Haiku Anthology, 189-end

response & haiku writing: three favorites with short response paragraph to1 followed by an original haiku in response to your favorite

haiku editing & responses: 1 favorite from each person in your group with response paragraph and make edit suggestions especially emphasizing possibilities or variations with form for at least 1 from each person in your group. (exchange these favorites and edit suggestions with each other by email and cc to me)

haiku editing: turn in all edits to your snow haiku by email by 6pm Sunday evening, March 3

upcoming assignment: select a contemporary author of choice for further research or email me for suggestions of certain authors you may wish to study. by 3/8 you must select an author for further study

for Sunday 3/3

haiku editing: turn in all edits to your snow haiku by email by 6pm Sunday evening, March 3

for 3/4

reading: The Haiku Handbook, chapter 13

response & haiku writing: three favorites by a single author from The Haiku Anthology or Global Haiku with short response paragraphs to all three followed by an original haiku in response to one or two

for 3/6

response kukai selections: snow haiku kukai day! read the snow haiku kukai and select your 5-6 favorites. write a response paragraph to 2 favorites

tan-renga writing: cap 2 snow haiku of your choice

for 3/8

reading: Matsuo Bashô, chapter 3 on renku and linked verse and the rengay handouts

3/11-17 SPRING BREAK

for 3/18

spring break kukai: write 5-10 haiku over spring break (okay, senryu too!) have fun! email your spring break haiku to me by Sunday night, March 17 (for handout on Monday March 18th)

writing rengay: two rengay (a 2 person rengay and a 3 person rengay)
(1) one with class members or former haiku roundtable students
(2) and one with at least one newcomer to haiku writing (you’ll have to guide them)

extra credit: share your own haiku with family, friends and others over spring break and ask them to pick favorites and why they like those. report back on which of your haiku are favorites for extra credit

for 3/20

reading: Traces of Dreams, Introduction (pages 1-29)

response kukai selections: spring break kukai day! read the spring break haiku kukai and select your 5 favorites. write a response paragraph why 2 are top favorites

for 3/22

reading: Traces of Dreams, chapter 4 (pages 82-115) find an example of a favorite haiku in English (by a fellow student or from your anthologies) that demonstrates each of the following 3 types of linking:

(1) word links—puns, objects

(2) content links—narrative, scene, progression

(3) scent links—emotion, atmosphere, social status

response rengay selections: spring break rengay! read the rengay and select your 2 favorites. write a response about the linking between verses in your favorite

for 3/25

reading: Traces of Dreams, chapter 5 (pages 116-1)

writing response rengay selections: select your favorite rengay from the rengay 2 handouts and write a short paragraph about why you like it best, especially discussing the movement of the links.

for 3/27

write a rengay or a longer sequence of linked haiku with the principle of no more than three links being ninjô or ninjô-nashi verses in a row.

(1) ninjô verses—people or emotion verses (self, other or both) (I, you, us, he or she, they perspectives)
(2) ninjô -nashi—non-peeople or place verses

Extra credit version—try a 36 link kasen renga:
(1) hokku—sets tone, greets all, establishes season, quiets guests to join in
(2) wakiku—builds on unstated elements of the hokku and maintains season. ends in a noun
(3) daisanku—ends with open-ended image (often transitive verb ING)
(5) usually moon shows up here for the first time
(6) concludes the first page (jo) often written by the official scribe
(7)-(29) heats up the links and leaping (intensification)
(13) moon appears again
(17) blossoms usually show up here
(29) moon’s third and final appearance
(30)-(36) kyû—the slow down finale (quiets back down into calmness)
(35) cherry blossoms always here
(36) end with openness and reverberation

reading: Matsuo Bashô by Ueda, chapter 5 the critical commentaries, pages 147-169

for 4/3

group writing response selections: matching haiku contest grand champion (and final four) with critical commentary from the group on why these are the top 4 or the grand champion

writing response selections: matching senryu contest (choose your winning pairs) and write a critical commentary of two pairs (a paragraph discussing what is excellent about each and why one is better)

writing: 6-10 haiku on a related theme or approach of your choice—not a sequence, but related in some way to each other (by scent, by certain types of movements between images, by approach ie childhood, or camping, or Easter, etc) Turn these in to me via email by Tuesday, April 2nd.

for 4/5

reading: Matsuo Bashô, chapter 4 the prose, pages 112-146 and the Haiku Handbook, 209-221on haibun

matching contest kukai plans to be announced (each group announces their matching contest kukai theme on 4/5 and who to email the entries to) (copy your entry to me as well)

for 4/8

writing group kukai entries instructions:

matching contest entries (each group announces their matching contest kukai theme on and who to email the entries to) (copy your entry to me as well) ENTRY DEADLINES 4/10 awards of champions on 4/12

matching kukai topics and person to email your entries to:

water • Joseph Kramp (jkramp)
empty • Brianne Marsel (bmarsel)
yellow jacket • Maggie Hart
storm • Stevan Doll (sdoll)
hands • Meg Schleppenbach (mschleppenbach)
chocolate • Krista Duffett (kduffett)
fruit • Natalie Kussart (nkussart)

Entries to each kukai are due Wednesday, April 10—one per kukai from each student. These will be judged in matching contest style, starting with 8 matched pairs, each being discussed and compared with written response paragraphs down to the final winning pairs.

Setting up reading partners for final collections. 1 haiku for each group’s matching contest kukai (also due next Wednesday, April 10th), fully worked and revised with your reading partner.

writing response selections: select 2 favorite haiku by your contemporary author and find matching pairs from other authors (write a critical commentary comparing the two haiku)

writing haibun: 2 haibun due Monday . . . one focused on a person and one from a special place

for 4/10

writing: matching contest entries (each group announces their matching contest kukai theme on and who to email the entries to) (copy your entry to me as well)

writing: a short paragraph on your comparison question topic

writing & editing: revision of your two haibun (with reading partners) and 1 new haibun from any of Bashô’s three approaches (person, place or event)

for 4/12

group awards from matching contest due

reading: The Wordless Poem by Eric Amann

writing assignment: your day of silence rengay (and any additional Spring day haiku from your ginko that didn’t make it into the rengay)

extra credit version instead of rengay: a 36 link Kasen Renga version of the day of silence. (follow the guidelines if you are going to try this:
(1) hokku—sets tone, greets all, establishes season, quiets guests to join in
(2) wakiku—builds on unstated elements of the hokku and maintains season. ends in a noun
(3) daisanku—ends with open-ended image (often transitive verb ING)
(5) usually moon shows up here for the first time
(6) concludes the first page (jo) often written by the official scribe
(7)-(29) heats up the links and leaping (intensification)
(13) moon appears again
(17) blossoms usually show up here
(29) moon’s third and final appearance
(30)-(36) kyû—the slow down finale (quiets back down into calmness)
(35) cherry blossoms always here
(36) end with openness and reverberation

for 4/15

reading: Chiyo-ni: Woman Haiku Master

response writing: find three favorites by Chiyo-ni and write your paragraph of appreciation with special attention to the Zen principles as demonstrated in her haiku

for 4/17

reading: read the haibun by fellow students at:

http://faculty.millikin.edu/~rbrooks.hum.faculty.mu/globalhaikuSpring2002/haibun2002.html

writing: Price is Right senryu (or television based senryu)

group writing: overview on your zen aesthetics principle and haiku (with examples of haiku demonstrating this principle)

writing response selections: select 3-5 favorite haiku by your contemporary author that demonstrate Amann's Zen principles and write short paragraphs in response to them why you like them. see if you can find a variety of the types of links from your contemporary author.

Does your author tend to use certain types of links more than other types?

Does your author lean more towards the person (and emotion) based haiku or objective nature (no person there) kind of haiku?

for 4/19

reading: Issa

writing response selections: select 3-5 favorites by Issa and write a short response to one and a longer association of memory to a second one (followed by your own original haiku)

extra credit event: tea ceremony at the Japan House (Urbana) on Saturday, April 20th 10am – 4 pm
(write a few haiku about your tea ceremony / Japan House experience) 2000 S. Lincoln Ave., Urbana

11am & 2pm—Professor Emeritus A. Doyle Moore on "A Primer for American Tea Experience"

for 4/22

writing response: find 2 pairs of matched haiku (by your author and someone else) for critical commentary

in class Zazen meditation on the 22nd: wear pants to class (we are sitting outside for Zazen meditation)

for 4/24

writing: Contemporary author study (and web profile) due for class presentations.

some tips and guidelines for your essay:

o what counts as significance for your author (which moments worthy of becoming haiku)?
o audience? informed haiku readers who want to know more about an author
o point of focus about the author? (range, style, voices, content, attitude)
o organization strategy (back and forth, progression, range, consistency?)
o open with an intriguing question that drew you into selecting that author
   or that draws readers into your essay
o provide some organizational preview or framing paragraph
o fully discuss and provide reader response help to 5-8 haiku by author

Eric Sharp—Carl Patrick
Erin Crow—Alan Pizzarelli
Gia Drouzas—Michael Dylan Welch
Joan Loach—Pamela Miller Ness
Jodee Whitlock—Margaret Chula
Joe Kramp—Jack Kerouac
Medea Mosxona—Carlos Fleitas
Meg Schleppenbach—Dee Evetts
Nikki Garry—Barbara Ressler
Natalie Kussart—Elizabeth Searle Lamb

for 4/26—contemporary authors presentations

Alexis Iffert—John Dunphy
Andrew Kirchgesner—Lee Gurga
Angie Williams—John Dunphy
Brianne Marsel—Bernard Lionel Einbond
Brock Peoples—O. Mabson Southard
Darrin Thurman—Nicholas Virgilio
Shannon Kroner—Penny Harter
Jane Millikin—Alexis Rotella
Stephanie Ford—George Swede
Stevan Doll—Gene Doty

for 4/29—contemporary authors presentations

Justin Matthews—paul m (Paul Miller)
Krista Duffett—Francine Porad
Kristin Card—Garry Gay
Beth Stiner—Foster Jewell
Maggie Hart——Cor van den Heuvel
Matt Eichhorn—Arthur (Bud) Goodrich & Cor van den Heuvel
Rachel Perry—Alexis Rotella
AJ Cunningham—Garry Gay
Tonya Parrish—Lorraine Ellis Harr

reading: School's Out by Randy Brooks

writing response: find 3-4 favorite haiku by Dr. Brooks and write a response to one

for 4/30 TUESDAY!

email your FINAL KUKAI entries: With your reading partner, review your collection and select 5-10 favorite haiku from semester for final class kukai (due by email to me on April 30)

for 5/1

writing: global comparision essays due (comparing your contemporary author with another cultural perspective)
           • raise the question or point of interest in matching these for comparison
           • include 4 or 5 matched pairs of haiku (bringing out the best of each in the comparison)
           • be sure to draw some conclusion or points of significance overall in the final page(s)

for 5/3 (FINAL SEMESTER KUKAI)

writing response: select your 15-20 favorite haiku from the semester final kukai. write a short paragraph about on your favorite haiku and a paragraph on your favorite senryu

writing: select your signature haiku and write a short paragraph why it is your signature haiku.

writing response: a paragraph response to your reading partner’s signature haiku

writing response with reading partners: exchange your haiku for selections into final collections & identify your signature haiku & write your appreciative introductions of each other's work. COLLECTIONS ARE DUE ON 5/10 at the Haiku Reading.

for 5/6

writing: haiku projects due for class sharing day

writing: signature haiku gift exchange due (32 please)

for 5/10

2-4pm (final exam meeting & reading & semester awards) in PILLING CHAPEL

Final Haiku Reading Planning Team:

o signature haiku book—Erin & Tonya
o publicity team—Brock, Dorina, JoDee, Medea & Matt
o emcee team—Meg, Kerry, Eric & Rachel
o refreshments team—Beth, Alexis & Shannon
o video recording—Maggie

writing: haiku collection, haiku poetics preface, reader's introduction & submission ready haiku with SASE

guidelines on final collections:

  • Select and organize your best haiku & senryu & haibun & renga into a collection (with your reading partner's help). You may want to write them in a little booklet, or print them in a binder.
  • Give your collection a title and a © 2002 page. (often signature haiku are connected to the title)
  • Include a dedication if you would like to.
  • Be sure to write an author's introduction to your collection which explains your title and expresses your approach or why these are the ones you have included in your collection (your poetics preface).
  • Ask your reading partner to write a short introduction to your collection, maybe pointing out one or two favorites—or their observation about something unique about your haiku (the reader's introduction). The reader's introduction should help strangers appreciate and value your collection.
      
  • Don't forget to e-mail a copy of the collection to Dr. Brooks!


Contemporary Haiku Author Study (essay & web profile)—due 4/24/02

o focus on a point of insight or question about that author’s unique contribution
o include response discussions of 5-10 haiku by the author
o may include interview questions & poetics from author's prose work

web profile:
o include some biographical background
o list of key awards
o synoptic version of your essayawards
o photograph if possible
o sample haiku
o contact information

Amber Millikin —Garry Gay
Alexis Iffert—John Dunphy
Andrew Kirchgesner—Lee Gurga
Angie Williams—John Dunphy
Beth Stiner—Foster Jewell
Maggie Hart—Cor van den Heuvel
Brianne Marsel—Bernard Lionel Einbond
Brock Peoples—O. Mabson Southard
Darrin Thurman—Nicholas Virgilio
Eric Sharp—Carl Patrick
Erin Crow—Alan Pizzarelli
Gia Drouzas—Michael Dylan Welch
Jennifer Clements—H.F. Noyes
Joan Loach—Pamela Miller Ness
Jodee Whitlock—Margaret Chula
Joe Kramp—Jack Kerouac
Justin Matthews—paul m (Paul Miller)
Krista Duffett—Francine Porad
Kristin Card—Garry Gay
Medea Mosxona—Carlos Fleitas
Matt Eichhorn—Arthur (Bud) Goodrich & Cor van den Heuvel
Meg Schleppenbach—Dee Evetts
Nikki Garry—Barbara Ressler
Natalie Kussart—Elizabeth Searle Lamb
Rachel Perry—Alexis Rotella
Shannon Kroner—Penny Harter
Jane Millikin—Alexis Rotella
Stephanie Ford—George Swede
Stevan Doll—Gene Doty
Tonya Parrish—Lorraine Ellis Harr

For bibliographical help, selections of sample haiku, and possible author contact information, you may email Charles Trumbull, associate editor of Modern Haiku magazine. Please DO NOT write Mr. Trumbull with a vague request to "Send me everything you have on someone." You need to do your own research work of locating and researching your author.

He is happy to answer "any specific question" you may have, such as an email address, a specific biographical datum, the answer to a question like "did Raymond Roseliep ever write a haiku about a moth"? or what was the earliest that Lee Gurga appeared in Modern Haiku magazine?


Types of Assignments

Informal Quick-Writes, Quizzes, Exercises & Planning Work

Quick, informal assignments will be graded with a simple check-system (+) (check) or (–) indicating completion of the assignment. These grades indicate that
     100% (plus) you have done an excellent, thoughtful writing,
     50% (check) you have completed the assignment adequately, or
     0% (minus) you have not fulfilled the assignment and cannot make it up.

Formal Documents

The other assignments are considered formal which means that they should be printed, carefully edited, revised and designed for maximum effectiveness with the intended audience.

Short Formal Essays 3 points @ A+ through F
Long Formal Essays 20 points @ A+ through F
Exams 10 points @ A+ through F

Informal Assignments & Participation 10%
Reader Responses 10%
Contemporary Author Study 15%
Global Comparison 15%
Haiku Writer Web Profile 10%
Haiku Project 15%
Haiku Collection 10%
Haiku Collection Preface (poetics) 05%
Submission Ready 05%
Final Reading 05%

 

(A+=100, A=95, A-=90, B+=88, B=85, B-=80
C+=78, C=75, C-=70, D+=68, D=65, F=1)